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Ramsha_Rais
Ramsha_RaisLv13yr
2021-05-16 18:33

I have read another book of this author and she definitely does not disappoint me! Her way of writing and bringing out emotions, is fantastic. I am definitely supporting and recommending this book as a good read! Good work author!

The First Girl

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Thanks a lot :)

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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉

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