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MUHACHE_JUMA
MUHACHE_JUMALv133yr
2021-05-17 22:58

Interesting plot. The concept of being the only girl in an all boys school is both scary and fascinating. I like it. it has a wild and brave side to it that most novels lack. Great work.

The First Girl

_Ana_16_
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2 Chs

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Thanks a lot

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