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Joondabest_
Joondabest_Lv13yr
2021-05-11 21:52

This makes my heart flutter, absolutely wonderful work! in love with the writing and descriptions. it's just not a novel, I can literally imagine it. keep up the good work, author!

The First Girl

_Ana_16_
4.9
2 Chs

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Thanks a lot ^^

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