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WolfyHime_Writes
WolfyHime_WritesLv13yr
2021-05-11 18:59

I love it I enjoy reading this unique and creative story I bet the author gives all her got to make a good and unique story like this , Kudos for this wonderful story馃挒

The First Girl

_Ana_16_
4.9
2 Chs

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Thank you so much :)

3yr
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Mel_Aniv
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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 馃槈

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StarNight_0530
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Book are something that lets you enjoy an adventure in a story. This story is on a little girl who was abused by her mother. One day, it was said that she was sent to a boarding school which turns out to be a boys' school. Unexpectedly for her, life wasn't that bad after all with her two best friends and the friendly environment around her. I loved this book 'cause it's freaking amazing about how beautiful a life can turn out to be with so many plots and suspenses. It would be an honor to thank author _饾悁饾惂饾悮_饾煆饾煍_ to let me -us enjoy our time on this book 'The First Girl'. And I highly recommend this book to any bookworms and yes, everyone should give this book a try or how will you know why I rated it 5 stars and reviewed it馃槒. Hats off to the author _饾悁饾惂饾悮_饾煆饾煍_. That's all for now. Thanks, StarNight馃挋馃槑

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Your writing is beautiful. You continuously bring emotions on each chapter and you never tend to hold back. The words flow perfectly together making the read worth admiring. A beautiful piece.

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Clapping ovation for the author, this is a well written book with amazing characters. The author has written with depth on the characters life that one can easily relate and feel what they feel. A book worth reading

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Mary_Algen_Guiang1
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wow! talk about being loved by a demon! I'd like to be his angel instead! such an interesting story plot and dialogue between the main characters. good job author-san!

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My favourite category book!! wow the book is good, the author has wrote it with a smooth flow. The story is precised and detailed, the characters are well defined; with lots of emotions, the author has written this book beautifully. 馃憤馃憤馃憤

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daygon_yuuki
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I can't say it's legal to place a girl in an all boys school. There must at least be 10 laws being broken there but I can't say Im complaining since the story is interesting

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First, the story development is fascinating. And second, this novel won't disappoint you. Well, it is because, it is modern, thrilling, and I can see that the Author is very talented. That is why let's support the author and read this interesting novel.

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Shadowfighter
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Holy Tangerines馃樀, how can you write so good. I literally loved it , so funny馃槀. I love the ML so much you made her character soo well. And the male lead is awesome too. keep going.

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Interesting plot. The concept of being the only girl in an all boys school is both scary and fascinating. I like it. it has a wild and brave side to it that most novels lack. Great work.

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