Interesting plot. Never heard of it before which is a good sign for readers to take a look at it. The flow of writing is good, decent but it can be modified. I am not much satisfied with it. The chapters are few so I cannot give a full honest review according to it but anyway, the story has potential and will do great in future. Make sure to update daily and a lil push to your writing skills. altogether, it's nice. [img=recommend]
TaintedMetal
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LIKETaintedMetal:I understand. This the competition this novel is in has been going on for just a few days, hence its current number of chapters, but thank you for your praise regardless. I appreciate it and I will do what I can to push out more chapters at a steady rate.