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R3vfor
R3vforLv43yr
2021-05-20 23:06

not gonna lie the whole novel it's kinda cringe. issei is always going on and on about how he'll fix everything and protect everyone. despite living for such a long amount of time he still doesn't feel that different tbh there's no maturity or intelligence.

DxD: Time leap

ChesterCure
4.4
116 Chs

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lord_couchpotato
lord_couchpotatoLv3

Very true, story is really all over the place, author just throws out random stuff to make him look cool without any logic. Moreover in this story all the women are good and forced to do bad things and good dudes are also actually women pretending to be men and they all love mc for no reason.

3yr
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romeotango148
romeotango148Lv14

Considering how cringe the little I’ve read is, not sure about you, but I safely can assume the writer is either a middle schooler or lower class man in highschool. The level of cringe combined with the age minus the wisdom of the character lines up perfectly

lord_couchpotato:Very true, story is really all over the place, author just throws out random stuff to make him look cool without any logic. Moreover in this story all the women are good and forced to do bad things and good dudes are also actually women pretending to be men and they all love mc for no reason.
3yr
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I_am_inevitable
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I expected more out of a person who went back in time like seriously and he is to emotional and unstable.

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Bark_in_the_Dark
Bark_in_the_DarkLv1

The personality of the character seems very unstable or forced throughout the chapters for someone who lived 100,000 years like the events, it feels as if the author will lack motivation or originality, all the things that the author adds are in the 99% of the other high school dxd ff.

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Fantastic_Spirit
Fantastic_SpiritLv14

It's a change. This seems really good. I dont usually think much of fan fics since they usually go downhill after 20-30 chapters but this one has alot of potential. If you could turn this into a complete story it would be awesome. Also dont drop pls, fanfics dropping at 16 chapters is just very sad.

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DJDAN
DJDANLv3

it's good, one of the better dxd fics Ive read a few grammar mistakes but which fanfic doesnt have any of those? I suggest giving it a read,

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Salmon_El_Solomon
Salmon_El_SolomonLv4

It is a great idea that the author has, only that it is very used. The personality of the character seems very unstable or forced throughout the chapters for someone who lived 100,000 years like the scenes and events, although it is an au the author is guided in the original and that is wrong, it should create a story without worry or be guided by the canon

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EverythingRelevant
EverythingRelevantLv14

Honestly the fic is great. People are complaining that he is unstable but what would u expect from someone who has lived that long and was despairing. No one would act all alpha the moment they go back in time, the mc has to develop and that is what the author is trying to do (it seems)

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Nah_U_Stupid
Nah_U_StupidLv2

Issei **** lol[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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SORCERERSUPREME_7
SORCERERSUPREME_7Lv2

this story is very good and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards, so please keep up the good work ..

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

"I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" "I need to protect" P. S. Unique premise??? Look, I am not frequently visiting Ff. Net. But this is as much unique as premise of noble devil son, that was shunned down and unloved by his parents.

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