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I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv143yr
2021-05-08 06:56

I expected more out of a person who went back in time like seriously and he is to emotional and unstable.

DxD: Time leap

ChesterCure
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116 Chs

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ChesterCure
ChesterCureAuthor

yeah what did you expect from someone who lived for hundred thousand out of year's who only fought because it was the only thing that ease his pain of the death of his love ones then returning back in time seeing them would surely result in bit of mental breakdown

3yr
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Trxsh_Paradox
Trxsh_ParadoxLv1

For me it would be then to go back in time seeing them would surely result in a bit of nostalgia, seeing them again. happy's

ChesterCure:yeah what did you expect from someone who lived for hundred thousand out of year's who only fought because it was the only thing that ease his pain of the death of his love ones then returning back in time seeing them would surely result in bit of mental breakdown
3yr
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Dr_Chad
Dr_ChadLv13

For me atleast, I should be happy no. Having mental breakdown is a no-no. Instead of having issues one should just swore to protect them from dying again. But well. 🤷

ChesterCure:yeah what did you expect from someone who lived for hundred thousand out of year's who only fought because it was the only thing that ease his pain of the death of his love ones then returning back in time seeing them would surely result in bit of mental breakdown
3yr
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M0r0ving12
M0r0ving12Lv1

I think you do not quite understand your mistake ... Your Insei keeps repeating the same thing and jumping from one mood to another. As a reader, I have no such attachment to and the suffering of the future, I have not seen reading it is simply unpleasant. Especially when it is said that he is a survivor and battle-hardened warrior. Okay, once a break. Okay, melancholy and determination to change the future, but constant talk about how much he loves them? Again, I am a reader and I, as a reader, did not see a future full of hardships. I do not fully understand and constantly press on this "love" which is more like an obsession? It is unpleasant. Yes, it is quite possible to read, but this mental instability. Emotional immaturity. They spoil the impressions.

ChesterCure:yeah what did you expect from someone who lived for hundred thousand out of year's who only fought because it was the only thing that ease his pain of the death of his love ones then returning back in time seeing them would surely result in bit of mental breakdown
3yr
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Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

if he comes back in time.... he'll have a mental breakdown 😅 where did you read that why is that so who said that readers don't like it .. nobody do this is a fiction.... so stop creating a reality don't be ridiculous/rigid in your thinking he's old, so he should be wise not dumb it's your fiction but don't ruin it thanks ☺️ ( take my advice if you feel like it, it's free afterall )👍

ChesterCure:yeah what did you expect from someone who lived for hundred thousand out of year's who only fought because it was the only thing that ease his pain of the death of his love ones then returning back in time seeing them would surely result in bit of mental breakdown
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