This is an Excellent read so far! I love how it starts out chaotic with them older, then they are reborn into a fantasy world. Having to cope with being a newborn, but to have the mental capacity of an older adult is a nice twist. I like the idea that it gives the author leeway to gradually world-build through the eyes of the characters, and avoid those cliche info dumbs. I am really looking forward to how this story develops. *Note to author: I would suggest a read-though because there’s a few word switches, most likely caused by autocorrect(says ‘she’ when it should say ‘he’, etc..) But there are so few, and the story is so (otherwise)well written, I had to give you the full 5 stars. I look forward to more chapters😊
catvi
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LIKEcatvi:Thank you! When I sit down to edit previous chapters, I will need to find those pesky pronoun errors. But for now, I will churn out more chapters haha.