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WolfStar14
WolfStar14Lv44yr
2021-04-26 00:26

Very original approach to ATG for those that want to try you'll be in for a superb surprise. The writing and the grammar is also extremely good! Now for the story as I said it's an original approach which I found very good, the MC is also likable and his link with XQ is kinda romantic heh. Same for the dialogues, they feel very natural to read. Globally the flow of the story is nicely done too. Anyway y'all should give it a try because Xia Qingyue best girl heh

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Daoist_david
Daoist_davidLv4

best girl indeed

Fellbane
FellbaneAuthor

Don't mind me, just casually simping for Xia Qingyue

123golden
123goldenLv2

she blows up the planet killing her brother and father for what

Fellbane
FellbaneAuthor

Well probably because nobody gave her the love she deserved. Don’t worry my MC will

123golden: she blows up the planet killing her brother and father for what
meatball_san
meatball_sanLv4

Then she will definitely not blow this earth, since I am here.

Fellbane:Well probably because nobody gave her the love she deserved. Don’t worry my MC will
JUST_LAUGH
JUST_LAUGHLv11

Well, what you expect of the expert Yue fetish😆😂

meatball_san:Then she will definitely not blow this earth, since I am here.
Ballad
BalladLv5

as long as this doesn't turn into the typical annoying story of MC acting all saintly while calling cultivators evil barbarians and he's very moral and would never take a life you know typical holier then though MCs that people like to write for some reason.

Kyubikn
KyubiknLv4

XQ +1

LonelyAtPeak
LonelyAtPeakLv4

Fellbane:Well probably because nobody gave her the love she deserved. Don’t worry my MC will
Dragon15681
Dragon15681Lv5

You mean Shonen Mc-type? You shouldn't worry about that, Fellbane is man of Culture

Ballad:as long as this doesn't turn into the typical annoying story of MC acting all saintly while calling cultivators evil barbarians and he's very moral and would never take a life you know typical holier then though MCs that people like to write for some reason.
nicolas_gonzalez_5220
nicolas_gonzalez_5220Lv1

No es por llevarte la contraria pero es un poco aterrado, nadie me dio el amor que meresco...mmmm.... explotemos el planeta.😋

Fellbane:Well probably because nobody gave her the love she deserved. Don’t worry my MC will
Venom_God
Venom_GodLv12

We will soon learn the truth...Mars said a long time ago that HSDE left protection for blue polar.HSDE likely created a planet similar to blue polar in the past. It's pretty obvious that they got switched when realm kings entered the area, and XQ destroyed the fake one.

123golden: she blows up the planet killing her brother and father for what
Nachoss
NachossLv4

Plus the private talk Xia Quingyue and HSDE had.

Venom_God:We will soon learn the truth...Mars said a long time ago that HSDE left protection for blue polar.HSDE likely created a planet similar to blue polar in the past. It's pretty obvious that they got switched when realm kings entered the area, and XQ destroyed the fake one.
XxEagleNightxX
XxEagleNightxXLv4

It's already revealed. Yun che even knows that all of them are alive, Shui Meiyin told him. Shui meiyin said that she was the who changed the planet, replacing it with another. She also blamed herself of how she involved an innocent planet into Destruction.

Nachoss:Plus the private talk Xia Quingyue and HSDE had.
Lord_Pendragon
Lord_PendragonLv13

actually her hands were forced and it's been hinted that they're either not dead but hidden in her mirror that her maid has orrrr there is a way to revive them

123golden: she blows up the planet killing her brother and father for what
schizocat
schizocatLv2

Who's the artist for the pic btw?

Stuffedcrow
StuffedcrowLv14

we need more chapters bro it's been too long g

Fellbane:Don't mind me, just casually simping for Xia Qingyue
Demonic_Mori_Jin
Demonic_Mori_JinLv4

69

40028922
40028922Lv10

In fact she blew up a planet identical to the one her family was on because the God Realm experts were trying to invade the planet and switched it for another one.

123golden: she blows up the planet killing her brother and father for what
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SinnedToHeaven
SinnedToHeavenLv4

ps-this review represents only me meaning, I dont know about others thoughts and only my view on this story without being biased. Writing quality is spectacular! The story was really enjoyable, it made me excited and hyped until the chapter 20, or 30. In the first dozen chapter mc's tragic story, and love story was so. amazing that'll undoubtedly put the novel in the 1st place in ff. everything was perfect until the mc started to train the che, and lingxi. dont get me wrong, I didn't mind that, cuz it can be ignored although lingering small amount of uncomfortable . however, the romance between them irritates me. It would be fine if che would go with some other girl without going out with lingxi, the *major character*. Its totally logical that they go out with each other, however, it's stopped becoming enjoyable because in the first place the mc and qingyue was the main point, then there is some other character's romance making it the stealing the lime light. what I mean is, it's totally unnecessary to show romance that doesn't include the mc , because the PLOT doesn't need it. What? you trying to making lingxi and che's romance SUB-PLOT?... It wouldn't be a problem if you just said. che got a girlfriend from the town. Because romance between major character outside of mc is fracking unnecessary, and it totally irritates me. the initial hype dyed down and now I only skim through the chapter to see the ending paragraph. in the end, the ff was the best I've read until 'that' came out. Also mc sharing his achievements with qingyue and che kind turned me off. I,know I know, the mc thinks that they've become his siblings but, Even if it's logical it just a plain text if it's not fun.

TheDaoOfBullshit
TheDaoOfBullshitLv3
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