Kyubikn

this infact maybe a good book, but seeing jun tianyun on every passing paragraph is annoying as fuck. we all know what his name is so u don't have to say it in full every single time. just imagine you are talking with your friend and everytime u mention your friends name (which u do a lot) u address them with their full name....like Leonardo DiCaprio do u like tea?, Leonardo DiCaprio how was your day?, Leonardo DiCaprio u look good today...u get what I mena

fair enough I guess

so will he let out his secrets open to anyone? the first girl , his sister, mother... not that it's bad but takes away the element of mystery from the story

tho I was super freakin disappointed with later chapters of how shun lost every single game, you've proven yourself to be a good writer. so will try your new fic for sure, hopefully it won't end in a similar fashion to your knb fic.

man I love this more every passing chapters!!

this is a prime example of a dumbass writing a fanfic without understanding anything about the series. my guess is that this author didn't even finish watching avatar, and wrote his story based on Wikipedia instead. I wish I could rate it lower but sadly 1 star is the limit.

really hate it when authors pull the rewrite card 🙄 But welp, it's your work...good luck with the next one

60... sheesh...I couldn't read it past 10 😬

I'm so lost @.@

stable updater or randomly?