Item: NPC Code: Red Riding Hood
Rating: 5
Author: SCARLETZEE

SCARLETZEELv23yr

2021-06-26 03:58

Just read the first chapter.. It’s my first time reading a story with a NPC as its lead.. and you make the NPC could refuse the story created by the sistem.. she must be good at coding.. lol... but it makes the story more interesting.. the idea is good.. the design of the game reminds me of MMORPG dragon oath I played during my high school.. It’s well written.. Best of luck for your WSA as well👌🏻

NPC Code: Red Riding Hood

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kuhaku_soraAuthor

Thank you! ^^

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