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RobloxPlayer101
RobloxPlayer101Lv43yr
2021-06-16 20:58

i dislike the concept. it is a knockoff of the legendary mechanic at the core. go use a original idea please. its not hard......................................

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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraAuthor

*I read the first few parts of the "Legendary Mechanic", and I'm telling you it's nowhere near that. *My concept is about an NPC becoming a villain. *I am adding fairy tale characters in my novel. If I am copying things, I may be copying those old fairy tales. Since they don't have any copyright (i think) it's safe to modernized their stories. *My reference is Detroit become human. I am not copying their story, but I am implementing new plotlines for the novel.

Snowphira
SnowphiraLv3

Well my friend, I congratulate you for entering the pin of shame! Hoorayy! In contrary to your meaningless review, I suggest to first search the meaning of REVIEW. Sad so say your 'review' right here isn't even close to the exact meaning of it. Disliking a concept is NORMAL but there are tons of other ways to say it in order not to offend a person. If you think its not original and deem it EASY to think of story plots, then do your own story and stop putting one star 'reviews' on novels just because you don't like their concept. If it is not into your taste, then its easier to just click the back button unless you, yourself has the mental capacity to write a well-written reviews saying the pros and cons with the reasons. By the way, Im the illustrator of this novel and I can tell you one thing... THE NOVEL IS DONE WITH EFFORT AND LOTS OF RESEARCH IF YOU HATE IT THEN DO A CONCEPT YOU LIKE AND GET A LIFE!

Snowphira
SnowphiraLv3

Oh and I bet you wont even take your time to read this entire thing and just ignore or comment meaningless things again. How uncultured. Dishonor on you and your cow. Come back when you got a novel to even impress your fellow webnovel readers.

Snowphira:Well my friend, I congratulate you for entering the pin of shame! Hoorayy! In contrary to your meaningless review, I suggest to first search the meaning of REVIEW. Sad so say your 'review' right here isn't even close to the exact meaning of it. Disliking a concept is NORMAL but there are tons of other ways to say it in order not to offend a person. If you think its not original and deem it EASY to think of story plots, then do your own story and stop putting one star 'reviews' on novels just because you don't like their concept. If it is not into your taste, then its easier to just click the back button unless you, yourself has the mental capacity to write a well-written reviews saying the pros and cons with the reasons. By the way, Im the illustrator of this novel and I can tell you one thing... THE NOVEL IS DONE WITH EFFORT AND LOTS OF RESEARCH IF YOU HATE IT THEN DO A CONCEPT YOU LIKE AND GET A LIFE!
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Chase_Xavier_123
Chase_Xavier_123Lv3

Read the story first 🙄 bro. A author takes to much efforts to shape a story sometimes English isn't first language too. And blaming author for copying really?? It might be the only thing any author wouldn't want to be blame for when they are innocent

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraAuthor

hahahaha. He's in the pin of shame. He stands where he rightfully deserves. I mean, even if he does reply, I can't argue with a kid that names his account "roblox". It's just sad :(

Chase_Xavier_123:Read the story first 🙄 bro. A author takes to much efforts to shape a story sometimes English isn't first language too. And blaming author for copying really?? It might be the only thing any author wouldn't want to be blame for when they are innocent
Itsuki_Suzuki
Itsuki_SuzukiLv3

Don't do that! Even a one-star review can offend the author!

Wolfick
WolfickLv13

Character that are part of the public domain are completely free to use and monetize. For instance, you can have Snow White in your story. However, you cannot have Disney's version of Snow White, and no Grumpy, Sleepy or the other 5 dwarfs. A typical example of this would be Snow White and the Huntsman, or The Irregulars, the color blind auditioning woke modern take on Sherlock Holmes

kuhaku_sora:*I read the first few parts of the "Legendary Mechanic", and I'm telling you it's nowhere near that. *My concept is about an NPC becoming a villain. *I am adding fairy tale characters in my novel. If I am copying things, I may be copying those old fairy tales. Since they don't have any copyright (i think) it's safe to modernized their stories. *My reference is Detroit become human. I am not copying their story, but I am implementing new plotlines for the novel.
Jspear
JspearLv2

Pin of Shame!!

FireNation_66
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Arkbrave
ArkbraveLv2

😂 😂 😂

DaoistSoulDive
DaoistSoulDiveLv4

thank you for this meaningless review this makes me want to read this novel just because you dislike it so

Spading
SpadingLv2

Stupid Review

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