Review Detail of man_of_culture3030 in To Sleep In The Sea Of Time
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Hello dear reader, Author here. Consider this a trigger warning. If you don't like gore and scary stories, don't read this. If you are going to leave comments disparaging me or my readers, don't read this. Other than that this book is a pet project of mine for a couple of years and I am just now editing and releasing it, along with its side story 'Milk Diary'. I hope you enjoy.
To Sleep In The Sea Of Time
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Mardigrasking54:Where can i find the other story you mentioned
It is called 'Humors of Whiskey', an Irish folk song. I don't really care for new readers, the ones I have are absolutely amazing. I will consider changing the synopsis, if ever you have an idea for a synopsis, don't hesitate to let me know. As for the riddle, the answer is the riddler.
TrevorTNT:I recommend you change the description or the start of it to tell the readers about the story better to get more readers and have the poems after! I like the poems as much as any cultured reader even though I don't know them or their answer unless it is energy/mana/knowledge.
You don't care about ,,New Readers,, well I was about to read this....but since you don't care to be a better Autor then I will to not care about this Novel.
man_of_culture3030:It is called 'Humors of Whiskey', an Irish folk song. I don't really care for new readers, the ones I have are absolutely amazing. I will consider changing the synopsis, if ever you have an idea for a synopsis, don't hesitate to let me know. As for the riddle, the answer is the riddler.
Care for, not care about. I care about you, be good to yourself. Have a wonderful life. Love and let... eat.
Ammammmm:You don't care about ,,New Readers,, well I was about to read this....but since you don't care to be a better Autor then I will to not care about this Novel.
I can't believe I have to add this but here it is. I am an author of a decent book, not your therapist you come to with your problems. Not a child you are responsible for, and admonish with your perspective of the world. Not a lover or friend you can entrust with your feelings. This is a take me as I am kind of deal. I won't judge you, you don't bring your issues around me. Please keep toxic, derogatory speech away from me and my readers, who I care for.
man_of_culture3030:I can't believe I have to add this but here it is. I am an author of a decent book, not your therapist you come to with your problems. Not a child you are responsible for, and admonish with your perspective of the world. Not a lover or friend you can entrust with your feelings. This is a take me as I am kind of deal. I won't judge you, you don't bring your issues around me. Please keep toxic, derogatory speech away from me and my readers, who I care for.
DepSpiritual:it would be easier to just shut up and not send new readers away but you do you, i guess.
Example of toxic speech. Basically if it gets you slapped on the street, don't say it and you won't my attention. You could have said, 'I think it is better to not send new readers away with your aggression'. But no, you want to be a big boy and start telling me to shut up. Does it make you feel big talking to me that way? Is it satisfying? Is it because you can't speak up for yourself in real life, you have a need to be passive aggressive online? Those are rhetorical questions. I don't care. This is a book on WebNovel, toxic people like you will always be here. At least my readers know I am actively removing them. I prefer a strong community over a... weak one. So I nurture my community, this is how I do it, if you want to be a part of it you are welcome. If you continue being hateful and derogatory, you are welcome to leave. If these words make you feel uncomfortable, this is not the book for you.
DepSpiritual:it would be easier to just shut up and not send new readers away but you do you, i guess.
Ok honestly I don't mind you've a literal poem in the synopsis, but I still have no idea what the story is about. I get that this is your passion project, your brainchild, your Magnum opus, etc etc., but I've literally no idea what this is about. Even a single paragraph describing the story works. Everyone has their likes and dislikes. And only a limited amount of time. I'd rather read what I know I like, than to dive head first into the unknown. So pretty please, a small description of the novel?
It is a story of a really rich man losing it all, and then gaining it back... and then some. Also it is a cool way to talk about physics. If you have an idea for a synopsis I would love to hear it, this guy named Trevor gave me a really good one, but I have been so busy editing I didn't even think about making one. Honestly, it is hard for me to relate to the whole 'not a lot of time' thing. I have plenty of time, I never considered my readers time. Thanks for putting that into perspective, I'll work on being more considerate of peoples time.
Dvaita:Ok honestly I don't mind you've a literal poem in the synopsis, but I still have no idea what the story is about. I get that this is your passion project, your brainchild, your Magnum opus, etc etc., but I've literally no idea what this is about. Even a single paragraph describing the story works. Everyone has their likes and dislikes. And only a limited amount of time. I'd rather read what I know I like, than to dive head first into the unknown. So pretty please, a small description of the novel?
Also this is book one of four, you can say this is a boundless drop, in a boundless ocean. The list of releases and 'pet' projects is as follows. To Sleep In The Sea Of Time which is this book. Milk Diary which is also out on webnovel, a story of... conquest. The Coming Of The Ship which is not out yet and won't be until summer of next year. Finally the Unseen Hand, which will be released post TCOTS in the winter of next year. I feel as if an individual has time constraints, they shouldn't read it and maybe even wait until the chapters pile up, or another option is to wait for spoilers and then catch up appropriately as there are a lot of chapters and it is a multifaceted story. Yet release time will be slower as I am editing myself, and I tend to go back over my work. I hope that helped.
Dvaita:Ok honestly I don't mind you've a literal poem in the synopsis, but I still have no idea what the story is about. I get that this is your passion project, your brainchild, your Magnum opus, etc etc., but I've literally no idea what this is about. Even a single paragraph describing the story works. Everyone has their likes and dislikes. And only a limited amount of time. I'd rather read what I know I like, than to dive head first into the unknown. So pretty please, a small description of the novel?
