Hey author. Liked your work. This is my second time writing a review for your novel. the reason? because I want to answer some of your questions. first: yes, I liked Ryan's past about his traumatic "First girlfriend" experience. I would like to read more about it. Second: The question you asked in your discord; about that, I would like to see Ryan turn into a vampire right away. but you said that that is not the main point here so it can't be done by changing the story's current plot. so let it be. Third: The pace he's evolving is great. Ryan's Ring System is perfect in my eyes. it would be nice to see Ryan going on another plants to hunt monsters with his System. I hope you upload those chapters ahead in the story. That was it from me. Thanks for the good novel.
AJPaturde
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