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AJPaturde

AJPaturde

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I write novels set in a Japanese setting with Action, Magic, Cultivation, and RPG Game elements. Website- https://ajpaturde.wixsite.com/official-website

2020-09-19 JoinedIndia
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde10mth
    Replied to hell_reader_boy123

    Thank you so much for such a lovely review. I am glad you loved the setting. And I am honored I could make you feel nostalgic.

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    Wizard Island
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    AJPaturde11mth
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    Yo, AJ here. I was tried of reading the same harem web novels and the cliche plot of anime in written form. My past two web novels had failed miserably, they are something I would not want anyone to read because I had written them the way web novels wanted them to be: Cheats, powers, the chosen one, magic, spells, and harem or romance. It felt so dumb. I liked anime for two years, till I watched American movies and web/tvseries. They ARE on another level. Then I found Stephen King and Steven Speilberg. Those two throw you into a different world without any drama and monologues (like in the animes where the character talks to himself in his mind). They don't spoon-feed you, unlike anime. And the plots are just created to blow your mind. Another thing I realized that was too stupid on this platform was the length of the books. They go on -- like My Vampire System, which has been going on for over two years, or that book by Legion. They were nothing like the traditional novels -- which started and ended within three hundred to four hundred pages (sometimes a thousand pages: IT by King), but they had an end. They would create a sequel (Harry Potter, Game of Thrones, and Hunger Games) if they wanted to. but they would never write infinitely, which web novel authors do. I was sick of that, seriously. And this novel is for all those who were sick of this too. You will see how I went against the rules of this platform and tried to create a trilogy that would not be of more than four-hundred chapters. And each volume will have a start and an end, not to be mistaken for an anthology series. It is like Stranger Things, where a new monster comes with every new season. I wrote the first volume in three months, then read it, then edited it by the fifth month. This is the process most web novelists don't follow. Yes, this is something traditional writers like Stephen King, J.K. Rowling, Dan Brown, Neil Gaiman, Margaret Atwood, R.L. Stine, Agatha Christie, etc., used to follow. So why upload this on web novel instead of uploading it on amazon? Three reasons: 1. I still have an income of $100 stuck with web novel. 2. The sales on this platform have reduced immensely. Where a novel would have 100,000 privilege unlocks, it now has around 70-75,000 unlocks. Which means an approx downfall of thirty percent. It tells that web novel is losing its audience. Because of what? Because of the cliche novels, copied from anime, filled with drama and stupid, senseless lengths of the novels. Web Novel needs something different -- where comes my novel (might come). If this booms, then the audience will come from Amazon KDP to web novels and I will rule the market. In other words: there is no competition for the type of novel I have written on the web novels. It is written in the style of a traditional novel. 3. To be able to publish on KDP, you need to be over eighteen, which I am not. So fu(k KDP for a month. Again, nothing guarantees the success of this kind of novel on the Web Novel, so I 'may' have little hope of this working out. But I have done my best. The best I could write and the best I would edit. If something does not suit your taste, the comment, and review section is open for all (except the trollers). So fuck!ng enjoy, for I might come as a savior for those who were sick of the typical style of web novels. I wrote this much but forgot to tell what my novel really is about. Welp, for those who are not offended for having their animes insulted (yes, they fucking suck because of the drama), go ahead and check out the synopsis. Thanks.

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    Wizard Island
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to PrimalChaos1029

    lol

    His hood slid down, revealing his dark black hair. His bangs, that were covering his eyes, bounced; revealing his deep blue eyes. 
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to mujaki2

    yeah, thought so

    Hitori grabbed her from the shoulders, he hugged her and dug his face in her hair. He held her closer to his chest, "please no… Jesus, no…"
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Lonely_Hermit98

    I don't even know what double yang cultivation is...

    "That old man… I can not believe he is on his deathbed." Saigo turned. "We two cultivated together since we were teens, I never thought a time would come where we both will have to say our goodbyes."
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Vioriaindahighest

    no. He hates to use magic, so he disposed the wand

    Hitori's wand made an arc and reached its peak before it fell into the river, then drowned away. 
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Vioriaindahighest

    Thanks for that, I will try to keep the excitement under control while working on a new piece

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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to dndeath

    First-- he got the gun and the skills because his card was special. Second-- well, I use <for system's messages> and [for game's messages] Sorry for not making it clear enough, I will try better than this the next time

    Ch 7 The Emperor's Scrap Picker.
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Lordwlesh

    yeah, it does gets annoying over time

    "That will be six-hundred yen, Hitori-san." She stretched out her hand to hand Hitori his card back. 
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Braham_

    everyone have their rules

    Ch 8 The Nearest Dungeon.
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to George_Scott

    the ones introduced in the trailer are Realms, not classes

    A list appeared in front of his eyes. The list consisted of Samurai, Archer, Burglar, Enchanter, Magic-user, and Science-user. And at the end were two classes that had only one further evolution possible.
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Neilyn

    yes, I am serious

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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Stephen_Timm

    best of luck

    The most popular VR game with deadly graphics, and a full-dive system that allowed anyone with the game's account to transmigrate into the world of Mokushiroku no Tennou.
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Stephen_Timm

    you must be unaware of the cultivation term, i guess

    "That old man… I can not believe he is on his deathbed." Saigo turned. "We two cultivated together since we were teens, I never thought a time would come where we both will have to say our goodbyes."
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Tyisvibing

    many did, obviously. The unique code he got with his card distinguished him from other players. Not that it matters

    Hitori thought of the very name he uses and has been using for every game he has played till now– Ryu.
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Inner_Enigmas

    Thank you so much for your criticism.

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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to assassin101

    He hates magic. When he threw his wand he decided to never use a wand again.

    Hello, Hitori. We hope you are happy with your present. It was supposed to be your seventeenth birthday present but here you go, the account card of the most popular game! We know you love games since you were seven, and we know you will love his game too. Enjoy the game and best of luck with your studies at the Mage Academy.
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Z4RO

    I stated my opinion, if we are going to have Vr soon, what problem do I have with that? I will be ready to dive in.

    In the end fading scene: "Out for sale on seventh of June 2052, preorder now!" 
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to WebDiver

    I don't think we are going to have full Dive VR games till the end of the world

    In the end fading scene: "Out for sale on seventh of June 2052, preorder now!" 
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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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  • AJPaturde
    AJPaturde1yr
    Replied to Iceman7422

    He gets a new element after cultivating enough mana affinity required for the next element. World background, sure, I have not explored the world out of his house and the Vr-cade. Nothing is explained, you say, I get it.

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    Solo Cultivation in The Apocalypse
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