Review Detail of MrChinchila in Abused Yet Indestructible Princess

Item: Abused Yet Indestructible Princess
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

MrChinchilaLv12yrMrChinchila

Ok. The potential is there. The story is interesting but I just can't give you a good grade at the writing. There are some glaring things that need correction in regards to that. There rest is well done. The concept is good. But the formatting and the writing needs fixing. I know you can fix it! Good luck!

Abused Yet Indestructible Princess

Mayemura

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MrChinchilaLv1MrChinchila

Yeah, gotta watch out. Some reviews are basically copy paste 5 stars that doesn't help much for us to develop. I call out their attention in the forum and delete copy paste 5 stars reviews. Feels dishonest to have them, you know?

2yr

MayemuraAuthorMayemura

Thank you for your honesty. I appreciate it. I hope to fix things. This is my first ever attempt at writing a story.

2yr