Yeah, feels a bit dishonest having two of the same review.

Is this an alt account of yours? Cause you repeated the same review. I'll delete one of them either way, repeated reviews feel awkward and doesn't add much.

Yeah. I'll probably try to step up a bit in my descriptions next chapter.

Yeah. It made little sense and was a bit out of character. Oda isn't that cocky.

I think I mentioned he was a cat. like normal cat. he just act like a human. also it's a he.

Rereading it now. It sounds a bit cringe and weird. I'll rewrite into something that makes sense.

Yeah, I'll fix it. I think him knowing that he died is a bit odd as well now rereading it. thanks for pointing it out.

Also, I swear. I have nothing against parents. I have great parents. What inspired me to make parents like this, was a situation that I saw with a friend of mine. He is fine now, yet he had to move since they were too controlling.

oh? Yeah, that was my fault I need to explain it better. It's the Japanese Mythology version of an ogre.

Thanks, will revise the things you mentioned.

Yeah, gotta watch out. Some reviews are basically copy paste 5 stars that doesn't help much for us to develop. I call out their attention in the forum and delete copy paste 5 stars reviews. Feels dishonest to have them, you know?

Ok. The potential is there. The story is interesting but I just can't give you a good grade at the writing. There are some glaring things that need correction in regards to that. There rest is well done. The concept is good. But the formatting and the writing needs fixing. I know you can fix it! Good luck!

CALM DOWN! There is no need for that many exclamation points. I'd suggest you edit them out to only one after 'SUMMER' and 'now'.

From what I read so far, I really like your spacial description(the ambiences where the scenes take place). Everything is well written, although you have a tendency of writing ' ... ' a bit too often. Also there is a funny mistake in the first chapters, that REALLY needs to be updated.

This gets the same vibes as a phrase I heard once. "Leave my galaxy or superdie."

It's like pokemon. Yet you made it satanic.

A miracle beyond the explanations of common science, of course.

So, I really enjoy your prose. The first five(actually six if counting prologue) chapters from what I read were good. There were some rough sentences that need some editing though, that's why I can't grade your writing 5. But if you catch those punctuation details, it would be an easy 5. I checked and you seem to update every 2 days, so your updates are quite stable. Story, Character and World so far for me is a bit early to say, yet from what I read, I'm really enjoying it so far. Keep it up!