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In the book, I can clearly see that the author has a creative mindset for their writing. It is clear and easy to read, but also too vague and has minimal detail. I did find some parts in the book at can be edited and have words rearranged in it. The book can also use some synonyms in it. Some suggestions: I suggest adding sensory details. Saying what the character(s) Feel, See, taste, hear and smell can help the readers understand what is happening in the story and put their feet in the character's shoes and maybe even relate to the character. May I also suggest to think of the five W's and H (Who, What, Where, When, Why, How) while thinking about the character is doing. Here are some questions you can ask yourself including the five W's and H and sensory details: -Who is/or who are the character(s) you are talking about? -What is/are the character(s) doing and how? -Where is it taking place? Is it warm or hot? Is it spring? Summer? Fall? Winter? Is it on Earth? Is it in a different universe? -When is it taking place? Is it back in the medieval/middle times or is it now? In the modern world? Is it in a different universe that is ahead in technology or is it decades apart? -Why is it happening? Why is character A doing that and character B doing that? There is much more questions you can ask yourself while writing your novel, I don't have the time to write them all. To help with your words and synonyms, try keeping a document on hand that you can always refer to. I hope this helps! If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to shoot me a message through the following and I will respond ASAP: Instagram: miss_pokerface_books_yt Discord: Miss_Pokerface#5708 Email: pokermissface@gmail.com ~Miss PokerFace (ShadowEditz) from the review swap♡