Review Detail of miu_hozuki in Dark Light Nights

It is never a good idea to change the spellings of known words to sound fancy. Such idiosyncrasies are barely forgiven even for top authors, much less a newbie. But then, I can understand the urge to do such things.. these anagrams sound and feel grand in one's own mind. Unfortunately, I give up at three such words. caves & vaecs? Thankfully, author does not over do this, and the writing quality is excellent. if not for the easy reading, and the fast pace of the story, over all brilliant quality, I would not continue. However, the writing quality is good, so I did read .. to the end. Well done. it's worth a read.