the pace of the story is really slow, I mean slow slow, too slow for enjoying in fact. there are almost 4-8 chapters for MC fighting a single type of Pokemon, and even after when he reaches his destination, author just brushes over everything. was a good story but I'll drop because it's just too slow paced, if this was a slice of life, it wouldn't have been so frustrating, but this is an action and adventure, themes that are designed to be fast paced.

I am really looking forward to seeing how this story plays out. I can see major potential and I really like this author. I have also loved pokemon sense I was little so my view might be a little biased.

achei muito interessante a perspectiva do autor sobre o mundo de pokemon, até o momento li os sete capítulos, mas ate agora perfeito '-''-'

Just awful, a dumb mc with a godlike level of plot armor who gets away with insanely stupid and risky things even when it makes no sense to. Not to mention the author doing that terrible fanfiction cliche of having the mc change nothing about the original story because he's scared it will affect his future knowledge even though his mere existence should have already done it. In conclusion this story is terrible and unoriginal.

- Charmander is at the beginning quality puple and chapter 18 suddenly red? - Plotarmor extrem (he can outrun FLYING Beedrill and like Anime move through the Forrest with no resistance from wild Pokemon) - He Levels Pokemon like in game = "fighting" defenceless Pokemon ... why not level Charmander to max by burning down the Forrest if its not necessary that the enemy fights back? - Why does he care about the Plot of the Anime? The world doesn´t end without Ash ...not like Dragonball where Goku is needed for survival - He travels alone because he wants become strong faster. Why? does he die if he isn´t the best in a Week? Why isn´t he enjoying live? He has a second chance to live a dream and he treats it like work. (english isn´t my Main language, so sorry for bad writing)

It's good but the whole exp and levels thing kill the realistic vibe. Like killing a bunch of weak pokemon should not make your pokemon stronger because why would everyone not doing that to get stronger? Max moveset is also dumb imo. This is not a game so why still using game limitations. I feel like the author is playing both side. Not diverging too much from the games and trying to make it more realistic. Its not working. Its good but could be better.

I don't see problem with translation or writing quality, so let's start with 5 stars. Stability of updates is promised 1 star for cheating. Story dev. and Char des. - Let's give you credit of trust 4 stars each. World Background - If this world will be really brutal and more realistic version of pokemon world. I am in. 5 stars for time being. I will update this review or add another one after 30th chapter or so. Current review is mostly credit of trust... I will leave proper review after seeing how things progress. Good luck with translation. You probably know future of this novel. I hope summary isn't big bullshit.

It is terrible we need ash back no matter what they are ledgends and they are my best friends in the world this is almost horrible I do not know what pokemon were thinking

Take this review with a grain of salt, I only read around 9 chapters before I just couldn’t take it anymore. Writing Quality: 4 stars, use grammarly, there are a lot of mispellings and grammatically incorrect sentences. Updating Stability: Good, no complaints. From what I can tell this was uploaded pretty consistently, and I know first hand that that’s hard to do without getting bored. Story Development: Almost immediately we are given the knowledge that the mc has both knowledge of the game and anime versions of the pokemon world. This sets him apart from the rest and makes him special. We are also introduced to Leaf as a possible love interest. Here is where it starts to derail. I can accept the mc wanting to travel alone if there was a good reason. The reason the mc gave however, is simply not a good one. Pushing past that, when the mc actually begins his journey we are led to the Ho-oh event. Right then, does the author make the mistake which I believe honestly ruins things. Glorifying the original main character and lowering your own. This is a fanfiction. Why the h*ll are you so against changing plot. Character Design: In my opinion this was done atrociously. The problem with making your mc seem so intelligent in the start is the fact that you as an author need to actively portray that. The author in this case, completely deficates on that notion. Time and time again the mc makes idiotic decisions with absolutely no logic. Time and time again the mc say’s he has a plan yet we never are told what that plan is. Instead of making the mc smarter, the author has just resorted to making everyone else seem like a complete idiot. My first case and point, when mc idiotically waltzed into the team rocket base after somehow scaring one of the members. Later on after he purchases something from that same member that he honestly could’ve gotten anywhere he is trailed behind by a member. This same member apparently doesn’t use any type of pokemon that would be able to keep track of him, and ultimately looses him. He then reports back and we are given a scene of him glorifying the mc for idiotic reasons, “Theres nothing I could’ve done.” Overall, mc is just an idiot in a braindead world. World background: Meh, it’s a fanfiction you don’t need to really give an indepth history lesson on the world as more than likely the readers are already familar. I am taking away stars though because of how you ruined the officer Jenny’s and the nurse Joy’s.