Mightiest_Disciple
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Mightiest_Disciple1dReplied to Munga_Munga_254Ch 3 Chapter 3 - Chance Meeting- Mightiest_Disciple1dReplied to Etiger789
My apologies it seems I somewhat misread that first bit. Allow me to correct. He has heard of the anime before, but never actually watched it. Looking back, making it a reincarnate may have been a poor choice. However, being surprised at someones wisdom is nothing uncommon.
"Young Yang. I see you are recovering well. That is a good sign. I must thank you for protecting Miu the way you did. You were able to give that man a good fight, and I must say I am surprised by your usage of both the Seikūken and the Inner Eye. And from what I have heard, you learned the Former all on your own. You should be very proud of yourself young man." The Elder's revelation, much to my delightful surprise, showcased his deep knowledge and perceptive understanding of the Seikūken technique that I had mastered. It was truly astonishing to hear him acknowledge my proficiency in such a refined martial art skill. My wise master had always emphasized that only the most accomplished masters possessed the ability to utilize the Inner Eye, but to also recognize and appreciate the intricacies of the Seikūken technique was indeed uncommon. This led me to ponder with admiration: could The Elder possibly be a skilled practitioner of ancient martial arts himself? - Mightiest_Disciple1dReplied to
I appreciate the comment Etiger. However, I do want to answer your question. In the series the Inner eye is depicted as a technique that is very difficult for people to master, especially young people. This is told to us by the Elder himself in the series. That is one of the main reasons he was surprised. Now, as for your claims of using chatgpt to write this story, that is untrue. I do use AI to help improve my writing but the story and the direction of the plot are all my own work. I simply use AI to show me where I can improve as I prefer to use more poetic language. If that is not something that interests you then I am sorry but this is not the story for you. But thank you again for the comment and I hope you find a story that you enjoy.
"Young Yang. I see you are recovering well. That is a good sign. I must thank you for protecting Miu the way you did. You were able to give that man a good fight, and I must say I am surprised by your usage of both the Seikūken and the Inner Eye. And from what I have heard, you learned the Former all on your own. You should be very proud of yourself young man." The Elder's revelation, much to my delightful surprise, showcased his deep knowledge and perceptive understanding of the Seikūken technique that I had mastered. It was truly astonishing to hear him acknowledge my proficiency in such a refined martial art skill. My wise master had always emphasized that only the most accomplished masters possessed the ability to utilize the Inner Eye, but to also recognize and appreciate the intricacies of the Seikūken technique was indeed uncommon. This led me to ponder with admiration: could The Elder possibly be a skilled practitioner of ancient martial arts himself? - Mightiest_Disciple1dReplied to FadeKnightCh 16 Chapter 15 - Mission
- Mightiest_Disciple8dReplied to Munga_Munga_254
It was mainly meant to show that he used the stance for the wrong situation, and got punished for it.
As soon as the woman elegantly rose to her feet, Yang's demeanor shifted, and with lightning speed, he unleashed a formidable kick towards her. Showing remarkable agility, she skillfully evaded the attack and swiftly retaliated with a powerful punch straight to Yang's face, causing him to crash heavily onto the ground. Despite the impact, Yang wasted no time trying to regain his footing but was met with a fierce kick to his abdomen that sent him reeling. Yet this unexpected turn of events served as a catalyst for him to somersault back onto his feet, where he instinctively assumed a new defensive posture. In a display of impeccable skill and precision, he adeptly parried and deflected multiple incoming strikes; however, one managed to graze his cheek. Undeterred by the minor setback, the young martial artist promptly launched a swift counterattack, landing a solid blow to her midsection that momentarily halted her aggressive advance. Seizing the momentary pause in combat, Yang attempted another decisive strike with his foot aimed at her direction; nevertheless, she swiftly recovered and gracefully retreated backward to evade his assault. With the intense exchange culminating in an impasse, both combatants locked eyes in silent contemplation as they strategized their next move in this gripping duel of martial prowess. - Mightiest_Disciple14dReplied to Zetom1818Ch 12 Chapter 11 - Training
- Mightiest_Disciple15dReplied to Juhiko
Yeah, he is an OC. Is that an issue?
I elaborated on the four distinct disciplines that I was engrossed in studying, a revelation that seemed to catch her completely off guard. Miu pointed out that it is an uncommon practice for martial artists to explore beyond a single discipline, emphasizing that the most formidable masters possess expertise in multiple styles. This unexpected piece of information left me slightly startled, yet undeniably intrigued. The journey to her residence seemed to fly by as we arrived at a place that resembled more of a Dojo than a typical home. The name "Ryōzanpaku" struck me as particularly peculiar, though its significance did not hold much weight in my mind at the time. - Mightiest_Disciple15dReplied to Juhiko
May I ask why you are disappointed?
I elaborated on the four distinct disciplines that I was engrossed in studying, a revelation that seemed to catch her completely off guard. Miu pointed out that it is an uncommon practice for martial artists to explore beyond a single discipline, emphasizing that the most formidable masters possess expertise in multiple styles. This unexpected piece of information left me slightly startled, yet undeniably intrigued. The journey to her residence seemed to fly by as we arrived at a place that resembled more of a Dojo than a typical home. The name "Ryōzanpaku" struck me as particularly peculiar, though its significance did not hold much weight in my mind at the time. - Mightiest_Disciple15dReplied to FadeKnightCh 12 Chapter 11 - Training
- Mightiest_Disciple15dReplied to average_ff_enjoyr
He's never watched it. besides, they are both children.
I elaborated on the four distinct disciplines that I was engrossed in studying, a revelation that seemed to catch her completely off guard. Miu pointed out that it is an uncommon practice for martial artists to explore beyond a single discipline, emphasizing that the most formidable masters possess expertise in multiple styles. This unexpected piece of information left me slightly startled, yet undeniably intrigued. The journey to her residence seemed to fly by as we arrived at a place that resembled more of a Dojo than a typical home. The name "Ryōzanpaku" struck me as particularly peculiar, though its significance did not hold much weight in my mind at the time. - Mightiest_Disciple16dReplied to FadeKnightCh 11 Small Update
- Mightiest_Disciple16dReplied to average_ff_enjoyrCh 3 Chapter 3 - Chance Meeting
- Mightiest_Disciple16dReplied to average_ff_enjoyr
I am sorry you are disappointed by my story. I hope that you stick with it and find enjoyment in it.
I elaborated on the four distinct disciplines that I was engrossed in studying, a revelation that seemed to catch her completely off guard. Miu pointed out that it is an uncommon practice for martial artists to explore beyond a single discipline, emphasizing that the most formidable masters possess expertise in multiple styles. This unexpected piece of information left me slightly startled, yet undeniably intrigued. The journey to her residence seemed to fly by as we arrived at a place that resembled more of a Dojo than a typical home. The name "Ryōzanpaku" struck me as particularly peculiar, though its significance did not hold much weight in my mind at the time. - Mightiest_Disciple16dReplied to average_ff_enjoyr
This is true. Welcome to Kenichi.
"Yes, I can already tell what you are thinking. Both methodologies are flawed, but just because you align with one of these styles or neither of them. What matters is what you choose to do. Come, there is a special Kata I wish to teach you, this may help you calm down." He gestured for me to follow his lead as we embarked on practicing a Kata that was entirely unfamiliar to me. The rhythmic breathing cadence of this particular kata seemed peculiar, yet oddly calming, offering a surprising sense of relaxation that not only eased the tension in my muscles but also tranquilized my mind. Consequently, this newfound state of tranquility enabled me to execute the Kata with enhanced agility and grace. - Mightiest_Disciple16dReplied to average_ff_enjoyr
I never specified the MC's age when he died. I low key forgot, but my thought process is that he was late teens. But you would be shocked how many adults would be horrified if they broke someones bones.
"Well as you know Umeda and I have been trying to track down that Yakuza gang who was extorting that shop owner. And we managed to get the location of their base, but last night when we were fighting some of the Yakuza, one of them charged Umeda with her back turned and he had a knife. And so I stopped him but, I used too much force and I shattered his collarbone. D-does that make me a bad person?" While it may be conceivable to a certain degree that I acted in defense of someone, the severity of the harm inflicted upon the individual cannot be overlooked. Moreover, considering my young age of eleven years and my corresponding emotional maturity, one cannot help but question the appropriateness of my actions and the potential impact on my mental state. This combination of circumstances undoubtedly creates a breeding ground for detrimental thoughts and raises concerns about the underlying issues at play. - Mightiest_Disciple16dReplied to average_ff_enjoyrCh 3 Chapter 3 - Chance Meeting