Review Detail of Zombie in Yggdrasil's Pupil
Review detail
Read the first chapter. If it makes you smile at least once keep going. Careful the author is insane! He will turn everything into a joke! EVERYTHING! (┛ಠ_ಠ)┛彡┻━┻ Slow start, MC that discovers a new magical world. Will feel slice of life at time, but it’s all slowly coming together. Worldbuilding will come with time. Well, there is already key information in the first chapters. As a writer, I’m a big fan of misunderstandings, comedy, and op protagonists. OP protagonist yet not steamrolling everything, he needs to learn his own powers. But he is and will remain badass. ( •̀‿• ́)ﻭ✧ If there are any errors anywhere, feel free to point them out so I can fix them. ( ￣ー￣)φ__ #Disclaimer read this novel at your own risks.# #Side-effects may include: # Wasting countless hours, maniacal laughter at ungodly hours, extreme disgust, sleep deprivation, cold & hot sweating, plant kink, hair growth, balding, aging (apparent after a few centuries), superpowers (low occurrence), an ominous lack of side-effect that will drive you crazy, the will to live, bass boosted heartbeats, humanity, demon lord voice, cute anime girl voice, loss of common sense, raging erection (all genders), turning 5/7 cyborg, opening a zoo, tentacles, crossdressing, hot & cold sweating, madness, mecha combining, sudden combustion, and more!
Yggdrasil's Pupil
Zombie
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(○ﾟεﾟ○)(ˉ(∞)ˉ)(｡･ω･｡)(⌒o⌒)(•ω•)(⌒o⌒)(•ω•)(´ε`)≡^ˇ^≡(○ﾟεﾟ○)(ˉ(∞)ˉ)(｡･ω･｡)↖(^ω^)↗`(*∩_∩*)′ノ(・ω・)ノ`(*∩_∩*)′(´⊙ω⊙`)`(*∩_∩*)′~\(≧▽≦)/~ヾ(≧▽≦*)o(´⊙ω⊙`)\( ö )/~\(≧▽≦)/~\( ö )/(´⊙ω⊙`)ヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉヽ（´∀｀）ノ٩(๑~▽~๑)۶( ^▽^)σ)~O~)(๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)٩(●˙—˙●)۶(p＾ｪ＾q)d=(´▽｀)=bฅ(๑*▽*๑)ฅ!!٩(●˙—˙●)۶⊂(￣(ｴ)￣)⊃(●￣(工)￣●)＼（○＾ω＾○）／＼（○＾ω＾○）／♡⃛◟( ˊ̱˂˃ˋ̱ )◞⸜₍ ˍ́˱˲ˍ̀ ₎⸝◟( ˊ̱˂˃ˋ̱ )◞♡⃛♪＼(*＾▽＾*)／＼(*＾▽＾*)／♪☆＼(^０^＼) ♪(／^-^)／☆♪☆＼(^０^＼) ♪(／^-^)／☆♪☆＼(^０^＼) ♪(／^-^)／☆⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄♪＼(*＾▽＾*)／＼(*＾▽＾*)／⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄♪ ♬ ヾ(´︶`♡)ﾉ ♬ ♪Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→
LOL 😂 I made an initial self-review. He made his including cool emoticons. I remade mine to have some too. Now this....time to get the 40 pages of emoticons out from early days TUG or naw ? 🙃
Nomed_Forcraziness:(○ﾟεﾟ○)(ˉ(∞)ˉ)(｡･ω･｡)(⌒o⌒)(•ω•)(⌒o⌒)(•ω•)(´ε`)≡^ˇ^≡(○ﾟεﾟ○)(ˉ(∞)ˉ)(｡･ω･｡)↖(^ω^)↗`(*∩_∩*)′ノ(・ω・)ノ`(*∩_∩*)′(´⊙ω⊙`)`(*∩_∩*)′~\(≧▽≦)/~ヾ(≧▽≦*)o(´⊙ω⊙`)\( ö )/~\(≧▽≦)/~\( ö )/(´⊙ω⊙`)ヾ(≧▽≦*)oヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉヽ（´∀｀）ノ٩(๑~▽~๑)۶( ^▽^)σ)~O~)(๑•́ ₃ •̀๑)٩(●˙—˙●)۶(p＾ｪ＾q)d=(´▽｀)=bฅ(๑*▽*๑)ฅ!!٩(●˙—˙●)۶⊂(￣(ｴ)￣)⊃(●￣(工)￣●)＼（○＾ω＾○）／＼（○＾ω＾○）／♡⃛◟( ˊ̱˂˃ˋ̱ )◞⸜₍ ˍ́˱˲ˍ̀ ₎⸝◟( ˊ̱˂˃ˋ̱ )◞♡⃛♪＼(*＾▽＾*)／＼(*＾▽＾*)／♪☆＼(^０^＼) ♪(／^-^)／☆♪☆＼(^０^＼) ♪(／^-^)／☆♪☆＼(^０^＼) ♪(／^-^)／☆⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄♪＼(*＾▽＾*)／＼(*＾▽＾*)／⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→⁄(⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄)⁄♪ ♬ ヾ(´︶`♡)ﾉ ♬ ♪Σ>―(〃°ω°〃)♡→
Zombie:LOL 😂 I made an initial self-review. He made his including cool emoticons. I remade mine to have some too. Now this....time to get the 40 pages of emoticons out from early days TUG or naw ? 🙃
I started with the first chappter and than skipped to see if you are able to write more than one lines without a text break. You obviously can‘t and I‘m sorry to say but i won‘t start reading such mess. As i don‘t want to leave a review on something I haven‘t read i will leave this advice here. Should you ever recompile your story to a proper format and maybe with less one liners hit me up and ill read it.
