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The novel has an impressive plot, with huge room to have the characters roam, but the pilot chapter seemed to lack emotion. It had great detail and amazing descriptions, but when it came to providing emotions or human body language, it didn't seem the best. I hope that it improves as it goes along, but I'm optimistic of its future :)
He's no longer a stickman!
Quite impressive literature skills from the author, which honestly astonished me when they told me that they had only started writing since the New Year. Genuinely interested in how the story progresses with it's incredible use of metaphors and hidden symbolism.
This is quite a good novel with a great plot that can be expanded upon further once more time is put into it! I would suggest getting an editor to look over your work and correct a few spelling mistakes, just to make it so anyone can sit down and read this without trying to decipher what's being said :)
Popping* might wanna correct this one in particular
The novel has an impressive plot, with huge room to have the characters roam, but the pilot chapter seemed to lack emotion. It had great detail and amazing descriptions, but when it came to providing emotions or human body language, it didn't seem the best. I hope that it improves as it goes along, but I'm optimistic of its future :)
This book has quite a good premise, with impressive execution of the story. The author paces it well enough so that it doesn't drag on, but nothing feels too rushed. If you're interested in fantasy/system novels, I would highly recommend giving this one a shot :)
I mean, I've seen people reference the left side as the left hand, so I personally believe it fits lol
They will.
That is true, it's quite a bad thing to do. He's revealing information about himself. You'll see where revealing this information gets him later. One word of advice though. If you want to read a genuinely good story, read The System Of Silence. I'm writing it as of right now and it's turning out so much better than this novel.
I don't think I ever specified, but later on it's revealed that he's a second-year student in his school, which means that he's 14 years old :)