Review Detail of Shade_Arjuun in My Alpha System

This is a great story. The werewolf genre has become quite popular and I think this book sets itself aside from the majority quite well, albeit needing a little polishing in my humble opinion. Writing Q- I'll give a 4 since while working is good, it feels slightly off with the grammar. it's not bad, just needs a bit of revision. Story Dvpment, Character Design and Updating stability are a 5. the story develops quite well, each chapter moving the plot forward nicely, though it is a little fast paced in the first 3 chapters chapters Lew is already going to school before the story sets up the proper relationship with those close to him like Sven. I'm sure the author has plans for that or already addressed that which is still fine.. character design is concise, every character being described vividly and beautiful though toning down the detail a bit would be my advice. From my previous experience anyways😅 World Background hasn't been explored much yet as far as I've read but I trust it will be expanded upon, thus a 4. excellent creativity on display here author.. Write On!