My Alpha System

This is a great story. The werewolf genre has become quite popular and I think this book sets itself aside from the majority quite well, albeit needing a little polishing in my humble opinion. Writing Q- I'll give a 4 since while working is good, it feels slightly off with the grammar. it's not bad, just needs a bit of revision. Story Dvpment, Character Design and Updating stability are a 5. the story develops quite well, each chapter moving the plot forward nicely, though it is a little fast paced in the first 3 chapters chapters Lew is already going to school before the story sets up the proper relationship with those close to him like Sven. I'm sure the author has plans for that or already addressed that which is still fine.. character design is concise, every character being described vividly and beautiful though toning down the detail a bit would be my advice. From my previous experience anyways😅 World Background hasn't been explored much yet as far as I've read but I trust it will be expanded upon, thus a 4. excellent creativity on display here author.. Write On!

I don't even know, everything just feels like it jumps back and forth, yea its a nice story concept but the story feels distant and skippable, just scrolling through paragraphs and not missing a single thing. Where did all these 5 stars come from, I've been rereading every line but it's still just loose and headache inducing. Read it for yourself this is just my opinion obviously I'm only one person so It could just be me

I started this book out of curiosity and I am so happy i decided to try it out. The book has a different feeling when reading, sometimes it might look similar to a book you've read and would be expecting or thought that you could predict the next scene but you can't instead a different scenario plays out and you're like How did it turn this way!? So unexpected! That's what I like, it's unique, pleasant to read, thrilling and exciting anytime I receive a notification saying My Alpha System has updated a chapter I'm always on my toes waiting for the Author to shatter my imagination and she never crease do so. I wish this book could get more views and acknowledgement before the end of the contest. The Author is also a very exciting person to be around with, She can be very funny and also dedicates her time to please her readers and fellow Authors. Wishing you all the best! Waiting for more.!

Great book great plot development Thier Only one problem with book is slow chapter release Also hope it stay free so every one can enjoy this great

I'm not gonna lie... I'm not a fan of werewolf stories but this is amazing work! Kudos to the author for such a creative style of writing!!! 🔥 🔥 The fighting sequences are very enjoyable and the plot progresses perfectly 👌

I just dont know what to say! The writing is so lovely and cool to read, the grammar is understandable and words cann describe this novel. keep writing lovely author

First thing while I started reading this book that came to my mind was what a fresh and unique book. It is unlike other werewolves stories that I have read...it's so different....and unique! loved the charcaters and how well it's described. The plot is very strong. Kudos Author!

Very different than other books I read, it gives me a thrill and I just can't stop. Currently in chapter 5 and I had to jump here and give the review. These kinds of stories have never been my cup of tea but I really like this one. THe writing is just too good, everything is explained properly, emotions, surrounding how they look and moments. the way the plot unfolds *chef kiss* keep it up, author! A fan here ^^

First off, this story is good. I love every chapter. There are few tensions within the story which good. In short, I love it. I'm not into the alpha gamma omega verse concept but I can dig this story. ☺☺

You're back at it again! Wow what do I give you for such masterpiece!? Reading alone has rendered me speechless 😶 good job Author! You have my all time support also dedicate a chapter in my name!!🤭

Dear Author did you deliberately decided to shatter me!? I have always been a fan of your books and that would never end, I'll always support you in every way I can.. When you started It wasn't like this it was different but also obvious you were new to writing. Your second book was beautiful, your third book was intriguing due to the Title alone then the synopsis which you still need to reduce😂 and a little bit of exaggeration was in it which i know you will change as time goes on. But this? THIS!! This is a different thing entirely, You have improved by 10 folds and I'm so happy to see you grow this much! Although we're still on some history lessons and I would like to also meet the other characters! Lew's character is great! I could see he is a funny character which i can tell you're definitely just developing the sense of humor in the characters that alone is enlightening. Overall I wish this book could see the light and be seen around the world. It's a great development! Fun to read and enjoy! Thank you for being a Great Author! You are my overall best! Best of luck!! [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]

The book is quite promising. The plot is good. I like stories which have a development from a weak character towards a strong one. keep up writing!

The book has good grammar. Character development from weak to strong is interesting. In summary, it's a good read to distract yourself on a Saturday afternoon, eating cookies. I recommend reading it to people like me who like books related to werewolves.

The book is exceptional. If you are looking for a good fantasy, then go for this book. The plot is intriguing and the flow of writing is good.

This story is great and I think is a Hidden gem. I Like your style of writing but it can be hard to follow. your style is written like a comic boom script Or a play .The problem Is you never know who’s talk. So i think You should put Character Name thEn what their saying. Exp. : Anne: I loVe pasta Anne’s mother: you get thaT from me i love Pasta Too. Narrator: and they lived happily Ever after. Something like thaT could be game changer for your noVel

I think this isn't he first fantasy work I've read since forever and I have no regrets, the book is amazing. I enjoyed the storyline, and the world background drew me in immediately. the only thing I wish for is a decent updating scedual as hooked as we are we need more then 2 chapters a week. overall loving the work

It's interesting how a Gamma can become an Alpha, despite being born the way he is. There are some smart comments and cringy, hilarious scenes that could make one cry and laugh at the same time. I hope this book gets the attention it deserves for coming up with such an interesting plot. Good luck with the WSA, Author! Do continue writing for us regularly! We are here to read your wonderful book [img=recommend]

great story! i love anything with werewolf in it! lew seemed like an innocent small lamb that i'm excited to know his future development!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

The plot is really amazing, I'm completely thrilled. The characters are okay too. I can see the passion the author put into this work, 4 chapters a week is impressive. Can't wait for subsequent updates

Nice plot with promising action pack adventure! I added this in my lib to see a gamma turn into alpha o.o Great work author![img=recommend]