Item: Magic Shop System
Rating: 2.6
Author: Lxpsy

LxpsyLv153yr

2021-11-30 07:08

I don’t know what to say. I really like this shop novels but this story is too dumb. Mc has some hard anger issues . Gets beaten by a weakling but acts incredible hard against ppl that could pinch him to deaths . The icharscter nteractions are just unbelievable and he is a Simp. Mom has some red marks and is obviously ill, yeah why should I care . Everybody can do what he wants . There should be at least Some basic laws . Why then bother with money and not rob everything ? First he gets thrashed and then he behaves like a king . I can’t Read It anymore .

Magic Shop System

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