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Magic Shop System

Eternal_Demon
3.8
246 Chs

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RainbowJewel190
RainbowJewel190Lv15

Jesus Christ...

3yr
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Kjhani
KjhaniLv4

this is what u call unconditional support

3yr
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dragon_Tail_hair
dragon_Tail_hairLv1

holy mother of god.........

3yr
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Neninho
NeninhoLv13

it was but a small spoiler button...

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FATHER_OF_LOLIS
FATHER_OF_LOLISLv4

Well, the book is well-written. The only thing that bothers me is because the MC is totally inexperienced but of course he can also gain that, hoping for the story and the MCs stable growth.

3yr

Kherb
KherbLv14

I am not good at reviews and am not qualified to judge writing quality. All I can say is that this book so far is quite enjoyable. I look forward to many more chapters. Give this book a try and hopefully you will enjoy it too.

3yr
ahmed_tanim
ahmed_tanimLv2

I wont deny, i enjoyed book.. it is one of the very few system based novels that i like, but unfortunately there are two huge loopholes in the plot in recent chapters. that turned my mood sour. 1. about khrom and rayna: khrom was incredibly guilty after he misjudged his wife and killed he, but suddenly he started new married life, just after a few months.. how does that make sense?? i would have no complaints if his wife was killed by others, then the story makes sense.. but when aythor added that he misjudged his wife, killed her and incredibly guilty for his action, romantic development with rayna doesn't make sense. 2. this one is way more fatal than previous one. both siblings seldom remember their parents. okay, even if i understand that they are worried inside, but dont have the power to do anything, thats why they are just waiting.. thats also good. but suddenly mc went on a business trip, he didnt think that his parents can come back in mean time. okay they were aboyt to come back in some days, so that does not matter. most importantly, after accidentally arriving into anothet empire, why are they settling down. instead of going back.???? why did her sister said nothing when mc proposed to start a shop in the capital?? if author notice my review, i would be grateful if you are kind enough to give me a proper explanation. or please correct these two loopholes, such obvious loopholes hurt my head. anyway, you rock, thank you for writing such an amazing book. please dont make it trash in later stages, or i will cry.. for me this is a master piece

3yr
Skabold
SkaboldLv13

Near chap 50 60 the story become unbelievable. The characters are weird, interaction weirder, everyone in this world is a arrogant - backstaber - young master - dumb grunt - idiot (chose some and mix them you have 99% of the character). And this make the story go bad. The idea of the shop is good but the story dev and charac dev are ruining it. Its honestly tiring to read again and again and again about Im X and Im gonna trash your shop. Oh no I get beaten. Lets call Y and he will trash your shop loop. Plus there is no law system at all it seems ? You can kill people and and be fine with that. Its a bit weird in modern settings, and it doesnt help with the story here because of the huge ammount of murderer/criminal in the world (all except the mc sister so far, so about 99.9%, even if we could say mc is kind of justified) The writing is average. Not bad, not exceptional. Anyways im disapointed in the story. I can t keep reading it.

3yr
Golden_Red_Fox
Golden_Red_FoxLv15

If you like reading about an arrogant egoti idiot. then this is the book for you The author is a good author I didn’t see any grammatical errors or major problems with the story that make it unreadable. But the main character is so arrogant and stupid that I’m surprised that he’s not dead by chater 5 I will keep reading the book for now see if there’s any character growth maybe he becomes humble later on in the book.

3yr
Chouzenfox
ChouzenfoxLv5

Reveal spoiler

3yr
Wolfson
WolfsonLv5

Well written story about a complete moron. It was one of those MC's that I was hoping would just die from his own stupidity but he kept being saved by ever-present plot armor

3yr
Lxpsy
LxpsyLv15

I don’t know what to say. I really like this shop novels but this story is too dumb. Mc has some hard anger issues . Gets beaten by a weakling but acts incredible hard against ppl that could pinch him to deaths . The icharscter nteractions are just unbelievable and he is a Simp. Mom has some red marks and is obviously ill, yeah why should I care . Everybody can do what he wants . There should be at least Some basic laws . Why then bother with money and not rob everything ? First he gets thrashed and then he behaves like a king . I can’t Read It anymore .

3yr
Phillip_Lyons
Phillip_LyonsLv14

If you're looking for a system that is different from the new norms since a certain Vampire System, this is definitely a great novel so far, the author says to give it 10 chapters, but I was hooked right away. I was looking for something with the merchant vibe and this definitely hit the spot.

3yr
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