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2024-01-23 08:05

The concept and characters are cool but I think two main things are holding this series back, one is that the writing quality can use improvement, it isn't just grammar but also pacing, it feels like certain parts can be fleshed out more and others should be glossed over. It feels like they gloss over parts that you would want to see from a power fantasy. Two is that even though the MC has a golden finger, there is little explanation on how it works or how the character his going to leverage it to achieve his goals which are also not clear as of 25 chapters in. Overall if this is every rewritten it could be great.

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