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antagonist123
antagonist123Lv34yr
2021-04-10 18:45

The concept is good and the supporting characters are also good. But the writing quality is need for little improvement.,.......... ................ ..... . .. ,..... ............ ................ ................ ...,........... ......

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NIRVANAFLAME1
NIRVANAFLAME1Lv14

cancel the little and all the .... and insert BIG Grammar problems here

antagonist123
antagonist123Lv3

?

NIRVANAFLAME1:cancel the little and all the .... and insert BIG Grammar problems here
Duncan_Morin
Duncan_MorinLv3

Is need for little improvement

Casual_Reader09
Casual_Reader09Lv3

it's quite ironic that even your grammar is wrong.

asdasdssf
asdasdssfLv1

Little? I do have to say this is way too generous. And story itself isn't really good either.

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