The concept is good and the supporting characters are also good. But the writing quality is need for little improvement.,.......... ................ ..... . .. ,..... ............ ................ ................ ...,........... ......

I honestly expected a lot from this novel, it has a good rating (I suppose because of bots or people who give it a good rating for no reason) the idea was very interesting combining GOT and the guardian of For honor, all of that ruined by the author, the novel has no common sense, logic or realism, the grammar is beyond horrible and the author doesn't want to fix the holes in the plot or the grammar everything works out for the Mc's convenience I could keep complaining about the many things that don't make sense like money but not the worst of all is that this is not even a novel, it is the summary of a novel, there are practically no real conversations, it simply summarizes what has been said in the conversation and basically the same thing with everything, instead of writing the event in if he simply summarizes what he does and says the Mc

This is truly something new . grammar mistakes aside this story have some promise. And mc is quite unique as well. Strong but not soo op . Though coins maybe little plot but rest of story is quite fun to read. great story please keep it going.

So far the story is interesting, let's hope you continue it and don't let it fall, will there be magic involved in this story? Until now, the character seems to me as strong as Captain America and you add magic that could hit a dragon. keep up the good work.

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a very good got FF all elements r present in it and writer was able to make the conversation btw the people and mentality of the people true to midiveal times the fighting , s ex , relationships, politics each one of these is present in it as many got FF only focus on 1or 2 aspects only in the end it is very good read

why did you stop releasing? I want more chapters.

Hi, the story so far has been very interesting to read, although I have some doubts about some of the MC's choices, but I'll keep watching. A plea from a lost webnovel reader: don't pair him up with someone from dorne. Keep up your good work! just post more if possible. A hug from Brazil.

Such an interesting concept of GOT and a good development possibility. In the beginning it really was difficult cause of some grammar but you can see that it is becoming better and better. It is just I can't seems to get how many wifes/mistresses he will have? And would he have lands or not? If you can keep those questions in mind when writing without exposing them, so you can keep readers hooked then you can be sure to be on your way of being a good writer.