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Andry_Reyes
Andry_ReyesLv12yrAndry_Reyes

A wonderful read! This book has an interesting premise, and the writing is clean(the only issues with the writing is the wordiness and messy punctuations) The vocabulary will hook you in, and the vivid descriptions are splendid! Although it's a bit too over descriptive for my taste. Describing the events are key factors in a good novel, but you have to let your readers "imagine" some parts of the story.

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System:Of the Ugly (Sotu)

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4Madliver
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I skimmed through the chapters just to see why a friend recommended me this and I did not see any descriptive writing, sure he is a bit amateurish in the earlier but his work os a genius, the narration of Phillipi is crude and full of humour, well the first chapter I read was chapter 33, which was the funniest since IDK. the Only reason why I'm not reading right now is because I'm waiting on chapters to pile up.

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