One thing wrong is the updates. Nice potential story. Nice dialogue. In time and practice this could be moulded into a good one.

An unique genre this one, yet there is potential for it. If author works hard enough he would make it into a fine story.

I came here to troll but reading this is quite fun so I won't troll. .. a lot. This is promising ,little typos here and there so author might want to revise the chaps. Genuine dialogues which are rare. World building is sexy so is the MC. All in all, a great read only falling short to my book. .muehuehuehue

my mine?

muwehe

I've never read any book as good as this.. Wow, Amazing, Awesome. The world, The MC, everything is the best. Or not, What do I know, I'm the author with 5 stars on his own shit. Read it and jerk- That's all folks.

thank you

A hot and steamy work, room for improvements but that is due if author keeps on writing it. There is potential in this book and could cater to a lot of readers. keep it up.

Thanks man although if I were to set it low then won't it beat the purpose of me writing at all?

I did not think of that at all.. I always thought people would love it more since it's the MC rambling his nonsenses about but if there are room for improvements I'd be a fool to not listen to it so thank you so much, this helps a fucking ton

I know it is not my place to tutor or dictate a style of a novel but I do have a right to criticize given a review, just a reminder to any- Criticism does not mean 'not liking'. . and here I go: I have an issue with the bracket thing... displaying emotions and tones on the bracket thing and that drew me a line- between reading a novel and a movie script. Personally this Idea of someone reincarnating in the Narutoverse is epic and mostly dreamt off so you immediately have an audience but the ton of infos you'd have to consider with every future move you make might sound daunting but reading this shows your IQ on the verse and given how the mc's every action moved along the narratives of other well-known characters I'd have to say that this is a great work.

Dude... I'm done building the world, made some excerpts on major fuxkening conversations and back to backs. Im halfway through the major plots. I'd say I'm about 60% done on all characters i wanna focus on, I want to do this because I've realised the importance of a well built plot before i even start with chapter 1,, also I've changed my genre to be a mix of gang(teams/clans) and God of war-ish typa plot. I will come with a bang, I promised.

Yeah! But he hasn't passed level 2

"He's joking everyone!!"

Helpppp!!!!

Help!!!

This Is the MC of the novel. I do not approve of you translating this. (JK) But wasn't it suppose to be "He is crazy!" instead?

Hai!! 🤣🤣 It's named by his little sister so..

crisp tap!! Noted noted.. [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

where in the rules did it say that?