Item: The Adventurer System
Rating: 3.6
Author: David_Neilsen

David_NeilsenLv14yr

2021-04-13 22:16

This story is hurt by poor grammar. There is a kernal of something interesting underneath, but it is difficult to get at it. The character seems very one-dimensional, so we're not really rooting for him so much as just sitting back and watching.

The Adventurer System

Jigx

3.9

298 Chs

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