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I've read all current chapters. here's my honest opinion so far (I've read 100s of these kinds of story's...webnovel, Kindle, mtl, wattpad & etc) it felt like I was reading molasses...thats how slow it was to get to the actual game. the flashbacks...were annoying...i didn't care & skipped most of them. I personally don't like stories with flashbacks. it detracts from the story & gives it a you dont need to read what happened so let me tell you vibe. if this was on Amazon...i would have deleted it from my library way before the actual game play started...thats how slow the start is & even after they get in the game...it was still very slow. compared to heaven online...so far this isn't a better story. fans as a weapon for a male...is unusual (I've only seen it in one other story) yes I kno they were used by men...but they are normally portrayed as more of a weapon for women. but I also acknowledge that they are most likely a good weapon for a little person(child). now I like the authors work...the author is an amazing story teller. the story was good...it just took way to long to actually get to the game. it's a book about gaming...id rather read about that then all the other stuff...one of the reasons I liked heaven online is because it was more in game then not. there were a lot of similarities between this book & heaven online although subtle. (makes it feel like a rehash then a new story...but it was all well placed). loved the name drop of all of our favorite character. honestly if I had to rate what I read so far...out of 5...id give it 2.5 maybe 3 stars. like I said on the other story...the author should write what they like & feel & not take what any review says to heart. I will be continuing to read to see where it goes.

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Falin Saga

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Thanks for the honest review. I can admit to the slow start, but I didn't want to rush through the back story as I did in Haven. Because I knew they would be in the game most of the time. This is a rehash of the story btw, I wrote I was rewriting Haven Online. I couldn't rewrite the exact story because of rules so I put a spin on it. Even though you liked Haven, you might not like this one. So please don't force yourself to read it, if you only rate it 2stars in your heart. I'm happy you gave it a chance, thanks.