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warrock4862
warrock4862Lv53yr
2021-08-04 22:33

The chapters are jumbled and the story changes abruptly and is hard to find the original and it also deviates from the original raws. The story is a Frankenstein of multiple good novels, for example "My senior brother is too steady". Its story and character development is extremely similar, but sadly where the other novel prospered this novel fails. If the author or the site decides to stop updating new chapters and put some effort into reworking the novel then it might still be salvageable.

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Terrorofthedeath
TerrorofthedeathLv15

Sad that such a story got messed up. It kept feeling like I was reading multiple drafts of the same story.

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