Review Detail of OrdinaryHuman in The World Serpent

Item: The World Serpent
Rating: 5

Review detail

OrdinaryHumanAuthor2yrOrdinaryHuman

This is a Story about an Ordinary Human turned into a Snake. I would like to warn the readers that some part of the Story might challenge the Morals of Humanity. The MC is currently in the Wild so the Human Concept of Morals will not be always applied within the Story. I will not sugarcoat my MC and the Readers can judge her however they want according to the Story they read. There is a high chance of the MC being Evil but it will depend to the interpretation of the Readers. I'm also not good in English so Grammar and Spelling Mistakes might often appear. Please Comment my Mistakes so I could fix it and Thanks for Reading my Story. [Hope you like it and Please leave a Review.]

The World Serpent

OrdinaryHuman

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Replies19

heather_samsonLv14heather_samson

I got to agree I read a story for over like 300-400 chapters no romance at all but suddenly the author added romance and paired the mc up with someone that has the same powers of someone they hate, and plus no one wanted the MC and that character to end up together because they dont fit each at all, aka the MC only saw that person as a work partner but they suddenly love that character despite showing they showed no interest what's so ever to then, sorry was ranting was mad that a good fucking story got ruined due to shit romance with a character that was not even a love interest or at best a childhood friend character.

ZA_WARUDO_:You gonna add Romance? Please don't, if not handled correctly, that is how countless stories are ruined.

1yr

ZA_WARUDO_Lv3ZA_WARUDO_

You gonna add Romance? Please don't, if not handled correctly, that is how countless stories are ruined.

2yr

kiwami803Lv15kiwami803

I love the story so far, please don't drop the novel, I know it's going to get popular soon!

2yr

ReadableLv15Readable

Uhm why is this story is in the Fantasy Romance genre? Is the snake going to fall in love with another snake? Is the aurthor into snake human action?🤢🤮. Very sus Aurthor… Very sus.

2yr

FoxnerLv13Foxner

Just saw this in my recommended. I can't believe I've never seen this novel before. You really should add more tags.

2yr

Ghost_PlayingLv14Ghost_Playing

I’m a little bit confused...? Is the mc a female or male? Or is it both but also none?

2yr

blaze_draconyteLv15blaze_draconyte

So far it's a good story, my only complaint really is the unnecessary amount of capitalized words. Not really a big issue tbh just thought I'd mention it.

2yr

PickooLv1Pickoo

second paragraph, last sentence "mistakes might often appear" more appropriate would be "mistakes might appear often"

2yr

MooseMaxLv12MooseMax

it's good but can you please edit the chapter so the capital letters that are everywhere are removed? it will be much easier to read it then, I'm guessing that many people stopped reading because of them

2yr

Rascal_7777Lv11Rascal_7777

romance or not?

2yr

Daoisttu8tuzLv4Daoisttu8tuz

do you have romance? but that does not contain harem

2yr

Shantanu_Singh_3484Lv3Shantanu_Singh_3484

is it yuri

2yr

ShirubafokkusuhimeLv14Shirubafokkusuhime

2yr

Marj_EonieLv1Marj_Eonie

please not romance huhu it's more fun to read a fantasy novel without romance!🥲

2yr

FruitlooperLv11Fruitlooper

i got one question that I desperately need answered i haven't fished reading and this still bothers me. when does the tournament start?????? it was delayed by like 20 chapters so far can someone please tell me when it starts.

1yr

RyughaaLv14Ryughaa

There prob will since mc is a female probably goin got be mad late into the story of they are

ZA_WARUDO_:You gonna add Romance? Please don't, if not handled correctly, that is how countless stories are ruined.

1yr

RyughaaLv14Ryughaa

There’ magic so she could get a human form

Readable:Uhm why is this story is in the Fantasy Romance genre? Is the snake going to fall in love with another snake? Is the aurthor into snake human action?🤢🤮. Very sus Aurthor… Very sus.
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1yr

UndeadBeingLv12UndeadBeing

"Be warned that the Mc is a Monster. She will slowly change into something that would possibly challenge the Morals of Humanity" Well that didn't last long since she got a human form(Although it's more like a body that detaches from her snake body) and says screw snake.

1yr

MclaireLv4Mclaire

😂😂😂this just cracks me up

Readable:Uhm why is this story is in the Fantasy Romance genre? Is the snake going to fall in love with another snake? Is the aurthor into snake human action?🤢🤮. Very sus Aurthor… Very sus.
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1yr

TheSolarEclipseLv3TheSolarEclipse

I love romances in these type of stories I think it makes them better

ZA_WARUDO_:You gonna add Romance? Please don't, if not handled correctly, that is how countless stories are ruined.

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