Can't wait for the next chapter. hope nothing bad happens

ok so its a 9 letterd word, that has to be censored. we can do this guys.

Im so glad jens back i nearly thought she died off screen or she was just snapped out of this world

1 point for dad

24-31 wow I'm not sure what's more surprising the amount of time Nan Nan is going to be in collage for or how old Zhou jun would be.

i think it got dropped

i got one question that I desperately need answered i haven't fished reading and this still bothers me. when does the tournament start?????? it was delayed by like 20 chapters so far can someone please tell me when it starts.

will "eternal saga: beginnings book" ever have a ending?

I forgot to write keep up the good work

as you can tell i don't re-read my own comments lol

I like how this chapter is mostly world building and explaining the main characters, I think focusing on one of the twins was a good choice but i think you could switch from one to the other if you want for more variety when writing. I personal thought the chapter felt kind of short but it did what it needed to do like slight world building and explaining basic things of this new world like the moon. Makeing the character oblivious to the moon was a good idea for more information dumping.

I'm really bad at writing feedback

I'm not sure if I like this Prologue over the old one. I like that this one has more of a story and the way the prologue ending leads onto the rest of the story of the book (I like how the hero and the "villain" have a personal story) but the old one gave more information and gave us a little more understanding of the world that the characters exist in. (by talking about gods and everything else)

1000 stealth still gets spotted

sounds interesting

i thought they were making an entirely separate novel that was just going to be a side story from this one.

I thought bird cage would be its on separate novel.

i love this story and the ending of this volume fits so well

At first I was like oh no this isn't fair then I thought about what he was doing and realized how big of a manipulative idiot he was. I think he went wrong when he started lying to them about his eyes and everything, like if he had of said "I already knew/guessed that you were quintuplets" it would have probably been better but he decided "Nah" Ima lie and pretend that i don't know anything and pretend to do all these good thing and lie a lot just so they like me more" How crazy is this man.

so this is a rewrite of the last one with a bit more added, correct. i think this book is really good and the writing has certainly improved compared to the old version. I also like the new mystery added in compared to the old one where you were given all the info on a silver platter.