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2022-04-15 02:25

A thoroughly enjoyable read. The characters are well fleshed out and feel real. The story itself is entertaining with solid pacing. The setting is interesting and well put together. The only thing it suffers from is the writing itself could be a little more polished, but it is still very readable and does not detract from the experience. Would recommend.

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Chapter 83: Writing quality (4.5 stars-> I will put 5 stars because there is no .5 in WN): Clear writing, small quantity of grammatical errors and the reading is fluid. Stability of updates (5 stars): 1 chapter a day Story development (3.5 stars -> 3 stars because there is no .5 in WN): It started interesting, our MC transforming into a snake and how she hunted and lost humanity little by little. Then her first companion appeared which gave the story a nice change of pace, from her solo hunting days to be with someone, returned to her her humanity. But! why only 3.5 stars? Is because of the generic development that goes after she finds the first Sapient species. She gains human form, the system starts to fade on the back, and her personality changes from a predator to a ruler and becomes "another one" of those kingdom building novels. Don't misunderstand, the story keeps being good, but, like I said it loses her uniqueness. Character design (4 stars): The MC is battling with the monster and human side inside of her and the human side is starting to win as instead of seeing creatures as food and source of power, she is beginning to debate whether to befriend or kill. Do you see the difference? From -> To "eat" or not to "eat" because of the "food" strength to-> To "Kill" or not to "kill because of the "enemies" strength. The rest of the characters haven't had extreme development yet, however they are likeable. World Background (3.5 stars -> 3 stars because there is no .5 in WN): Typical medieval fantasy world but with the main races being Elves, Dwarfs, Orcs, spirits and sapient monsters at least for the moment. Of course our MC is the "new" faction which are SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER: (((((((((((((((((demons))))))))))))))))))))))

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