Item: The World Serpent
Rating: 5
Author: OrdinaryHuman

OrdinaryHumanAuthor3yr

2021-05-04 13:13

This is a Story about an Ordinary Human turned into a Snake. I would like to warn the readers that some part of the Story might challenge the Morals of Humanity. The MC is currently in the Wild so the Human Concept of Morals will not be always applied within the Story. I will not sugarcoat my MC and the Readers can judge her however they want according to the Story they read. There is a high chance of the MC being Evil but it will depend to the interpretation of the Readers. I'm also not good in English so Grammar and Spelling Mistakes might often appear. Please Comment my Mistakes so I could fix it and Thanks for Reading my Story. [Hope you like it and Please leave a Review.]

The World Serpent

OrdinaryHuman

4.7

248 Chs

Liked by 47 people

Replies20

ZA_WARUDO_Lv3

You gonna add Romance? Please don't, if not handled correctly, that is how countless stories are ruined.

3yr

kiwami803Lv15

I love the story so far, please don't drop the novel, I know it's going to get popular soon!

3yr

ReadableLv15

Uhm why is this story is in the Fantasy Romance genre? Is the snake going to fall in love with another snake? Is the aurthor into snake human action?🤢🤮. Very sus Aurthor… Very sus.

3yr

FoxnerLv13

Just saw this in my recommended. I can't believe I've never seen this novel before. You really should add more tags.

3yr

Ghost_PlayingLv14

I’m a little bit confused...? Is the mc a female or male? Or is it both but also none?

3yr

blaze_draconyteLv15

So far it's a good story, my only complaint really is the unnecessary amount of capitalized words. Not really a big issue tbh just thought I'd mention it.

3yr

PickooLv1

second paragraph, last sentence "mistakes might often appear" more appropriate would be "mistakes might appear often"

2yr

MooseMaxLv12

it's good but can you please edit the chapter so the capital letters that are everywhere are removed? it will be much easier to read it then, I'm guessing that many people stopped reading because of them

2yr

Rascal_7777Lv11

romance or not?

2yr

Daoisttu8tuzLv4

do you have romance? but that does not contain harem

2yr

Shantanu_Singh_3484Lv4

is it yuri

2yr

ShirubafokkusuhimeLv15

2yr

Marj_EonieLv1

please not romance huhu it's more fun to read a fantasy novel without romance!🥲

2yr

FruitlooperLv11

i got one question that I desperately need answered i haven't fished reading and this still bothers me. when does the tournament start?????? it was delayed by like 20 chapters so far can someone please tell me when it starts.

2yr

RyughaaLv14

There prob will since mc is a female probably goin got be mad late into the story of they are

ZA_WARUDO_:You gonna add Romance? Please don't, if not handled correctly, that is how countless stories are ruined.

2yr

RyughaaLv14

There’ magic so she could get a human form

Readable:Uhm why is this story is in the Fantasy Romance genre? Is the snake going to fall in love with another snake? Is the aurthor into snake human action?🤢🤮. Very sus Aurthor… Very sus.
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2yr

UndeadBeingLv12

"Be warned that the Mc is a Monster. She will slowly change into something that would possibly challenge the Morals of Humanity" Well that didn't last long since she got a human form(Although it's more like a body that detaches from her snake body) and says screw snake.

2yr

MclaireLv4

😂😂😂this just cracks me up

Readable:Uhm why is this story is in the Fantasy Romance genre? Is the snake going to fall in love with another snake? Is the aurthor into snake human action?🤢🤮. Very sus Aurthor… Very sus.
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2yr

TheSolarEclipseLv4

I love romances in these type of stories I think it makes them better

ZA_WARUDO_:You gonna add Romance? Please don't, if not handled correctly, that is how countless stories are ruined.

1yr

TheSolarEclipseLv4

Authors ver Sussy F#t#sh

Readable:Uhm why is this story is in the Fantasy Romance genre? Is the snake going to fall in love with another snake? Is the aurthor into snake human action?🤢🤮. Very sus Aurthor… Very sus.
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Kitsune_KuramaLv15

what can I say the minute I found this I was hooked and binge read this to its current release and I was not disappointed. The world building is amazing, lovable characters, cool action and character growth is good and fun to read. Looking forward to what is in store for Persia as she raises to the peak

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DragramisLv4

Why are So many Different words Capitalized? It is Very annoying To read It like This. Also tense Keeps changing from Time to Time. Also some sentences Just end like

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noah_pomerantzLv2

its a good book so far

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MortrexoLv2

Chapter 83: Writing quality (4.5 stars-> I will put 5 stars because there is no .5 in WN): Clear writing, small quantity of grammatical errors and the reading is fluid. Stability of updates (5 stars): 1 chapter a day Story development (3.5 stars -> 3 stars because there is no .5 in WN): It started interesting, our MC transforming into a snake and how she hunted and lost humanity little by little. Then her first companion appeared which gave the story a nice change of pace, from her solo hunting days to be with someone, returned to her her humanity. But! why only 3.5 stars? Is because of the generic development that goes after she finds the first Sapient species. She gains human form, the system starts to fade on the back, and her personality changes from a predator to a ruler and becomes "another one" of those kingdom building novels. Don't misunderstand, the story keeps being good, but, like I said it loses her uniqueness. Character design (4 stars): The MC is battling with the monster and human side inside of her and the human side is starting to win as instead of seeing creatures as food and source of power, she is beginning to debate whether to befriend or kill. Do you see the difference? From -> To "eat" or not to "eat" because of the "food" strength to-> To "Kill" or not to "kill because of the "enemies" strength. The rest of the characters haven't had extreme development yet, however they are likeable. World Background (3.5 stars -> 3 stars because there is no .5 in WN): Typical medieval fantasy world but with the main races being Elves, Dwarfs, Orcs, spirits and sapient monsters at least for the moment. Of course our MC is the "new" faction which are SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER: (((((((((((((((((demons))))))))))))))))))))))

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UndeadBeingLv12

Tell it to me straight author, is she gonna stay as a serpent full time or is she gonna go the way of the bad novel and turn into a human? ………………………..

3yr

CryptoCatLv5

Haven’t read it yet, I just really appreciate the synopsis and how it seems to be telling us that we will actually be getting a ‘monster’ as a protagonist.

2yr

Recon2024Lv4

Loving it so far keep it up u r continuing the story, right?

3yr

Boy_AwesomeLv4

Does anyone know what happened to the author? The story is really good and I don't want it to stop. If they are sick I hope that they're feeling better. If they're not coming back, best wishes!

1yr

Tosin_FasoroLv15

this story is going good so far I would tell you love me if Persian does a male interest or a male love I love the fact that she's overpowered but to the point of she still growing which is good for main character because some books tend to just have overpowered from the beginning and no longer any character development this book is different I am excited to what the other will give us next I hope she's able to fall in love though with a guy I have nothing against females but I just can't connect when it's 2 girls I'm very cliche like that overpowered mc and a even more of a powered love interest [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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