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Just lost the passion. And focused on other stuff.
I’m going to rewrite soon. To fix all the issues I made. Such as grammar or etc But as of right now I’m just continuing it. Will be rewriting all chapters soon and reposting it later but for now I’m going to work on new chapters
At a certain level it can’t boost.
Fixed, thank you for pointing it out. When I imitate a certain style, sometimes, I just forget names, and do ones I know, that's my fault for this common mistake.
Fixed later on
Fixed in later chapters.
It was off screen as when he was downstairs and when he went up he had bought clothes also when I say nightgown it was lingere grammar issues.
I made mistake grammar and style I was imitating, and had gotten mixed up when writing my bad. Will fix this
It's only shown like once in the anime with e interpretation of Naoya Zenin and Naobito Zenin. Where since naobito from a older generation interrupted jit in slow animations. While Naoya did it with 24 frame animation. A newer style. It's also shown when yuji first awaked shrine in the manga. The way you interpret the technique determines the way it can be different from the other versions of the same technique.
at most 3-4 people.