Review Detail of zako4 in Ascension of the Nephilim

Item: Ascension of the Nephilim
Rating: 2.4

Review detail

zako4Lv102yrzako4

Can't take the story seriously. The story itself seems serious and interesting but the jokes are too forced. The premise of the story seemed good but the jokes broke the balance. Would had been a good without the time God info dumping and making dumb jokes.

Ascension of the Nephilim

Rapture_Tales

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Shard_6761Lv15Shard_6761

agreed there is a lot I liked: at the start it sounded super interesting) but the unending 4th wall brakes, the "time god" talking about his other "incarnations" among other things is just too annoying . I don't know if I'll continue.

2yr