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I103
I103Lv143yr
2021-08-05 04:19

Interesting intial premis engaging first couple of chapters before a sharp decline. if your looking for a more whimsical or comedy based story this would work but the 4th wall breaking and overall lack of seriousness lead Me to lose interest.(disclaimer only read first 30 chapters)

Ascension of the Nephilim

Rapture_Tales
4.1
721 Chs

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Mr_HonestReview
Mr_HonestReviewLv3

You should read at least 50 chapters. For me it is good enough, the humour is getting better. You are correct, the 4th wall breaking is irritating, but it gets better at later chapters.

3yr
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LaoTze
LaoTzeLv14

Thank you, I know to skip. I absolutely loathe stories that break the 4th wall, and stories that aren't serious.

3yr
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Warren_Ayivor
Warren_AyivorLv11

Personnal the jokes don't bother me I even love them and I still find the novel very serious, the tension is still there during crisis moments and was shocked many times by the revelations and world background. If it can reassure you those jokes become a lot less present in latest chapters

2yr
Other Reviews
Rapture_Tales
Rapture_TalesAuthor

As the author, I'll leave the first review ever. I think it's awesome. I like it. Really, I do. I am having fun writing this and I enjoy and laugh as I write it. I like my own work. I now that sounds narcissistic but it is what it is. Anyway, I only placed this review to help me get the necessary 10 reviews so that it will display stuff. As for what I can say about this story: It won't be a generic MC 'fighting' his way and overcoming his enemies through sudden power-ups and cliché things. The story and journey itself would be unique. it won't be an MC traveling from one place to another, finding trouble, and beating baddies. It'll be complicated. It'll be weird. Since I'm weird.

3yr

Jlairu
JlairuLv11

The writing allows for great understanding, so I am honest when I say this story is mediocre. There is slow meaningless development; it took four chapters for the introduction to end. The God Of Time’s sole purpose is to add tons of useless info. Sending them back in time and gasping at how fantastic our main character is, is the only nice thing he does. What might you look forward to when reading? A system. Boring dialogues that may last entire chapters. An eternally sealed protagonist. What I dislike The seal is a major part of the story. But the author doesn’t care about it. There is no information on it and no action against it. The seal is simply there, and the main character is weak.

3yr
KahThelOs
KahThelOsLv1

Honestly, I love this book. I only recently started it but I love the author’a sense of humor, the premise is good and the grammar is good. An absolutely phenomenal read so far, I’m looking forward to where this book goes!

3yr
DaoistXJlqbO
DaoistXJlqbOLv14

no character development or actual character details of anyone that is not the MC. I can't help but skim and give up on the story because the characters don't make any sense.

3yr
Kill_Baby
Kill_BabyLv13

It started as awesome, but it gets boring afterward and the jokes between the mc and the god of time are not funny at all.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

2yr
zako4
zako4Lv10

Can't take the story seriously. The story itself seems serious and interesting but the jokes are too forced. The premise of the story seemed good but the jokes broke the balance. Would had been a good without the time God info dumping and making dumb jokes.

2yr
TeirOne
TeirOneLv12

I think I’m Around 25-30 chapters in and I just can’t Stick with it. Mostly because it’s Just power after power after power. Like I can understand since it’s A time travel Novel. But atm it feels like there’s No substance In there. No actual plot.

2yr
Jmitch1
Jmitch1Lv15

It’s just non-stop talking. Nothing much actually happens but talk after talk after talk between characters. I new at some point I couldn’t anymore. IF I can’t for free chapters, I wouldn’t imagine chapters I’d have to pay. Not worth my time. Started off good and has an interesting premise, but wow… way to break the most basic rules of storytelling.

2yr
TheGrandMemerofQI
TheGrandMemerofQILv15

I was shocked how no reviews point out how bad the lack of actual editing is in the initial chapters. There is little to no explanation of what is happening, just a massive info dump and random character names thrown at you without any connection fostered between the reader and the story. Hardly any world-building leads to large portions of chapters feeling tedious and a time waste to read. Bad sentence flow, poor wording and terrible jokes made me drop this. The overall premise of the novel is interesting. However poorly executed and very generic regarding naming.

1yr
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