Mr_HonestReview

If the MC keeps acting like a pushover, it's time to drop this.

A wimp?

I'll marinate, I'll be back so please don't drop this again.

the reasoning is very flawed. If he received a crippling injury but survived, what then?Live a life with disability? Instead of taking advantage of a perfect heal, he chose some bullsheyt excuse.

no shiyt bruv, battling a same war everyday for a year? A lunatic indeed

It's ridiculous... Too much ass kissing.

Inconsistencies, it wasn't just the mist village— every village attacked uzu

Secondly, regarding the power scaling between the Naruto verse and 40K, you’re nerfing Naruto too much. I can accept that Custodes could dominate the Naruto verse, but standard Ultramarines—except at Calgar level—shouldn’t. Custodes and Calgar would still be completely outclassed by god-tier characters. Ps. I don't want to argue about the logic of it. Just don't make it too biased.

Overall it's good but I'd like to point out the inconsistencies. Firstly, if the MC can remember Tony, it doesn’t make sense for him not to remember Thor. Ultramarines don’t undergo memory wipes; their memories simply fade over time because they were recruited before puberty. But the MC is a transmigrator—he lived a full life before becoming an Ultramarine. When the system activated, he even experienced a flashback of his past, which means those memories should naturally resurface, especially since he already remembered Tony. Add to that the Emperor’s blessing, and it’s only logical that the MC would try to recover as much of his past as possible. Ultramarines don’t half-ass their mission.

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