Review Detail of Acylith in Duality or destiny?

As an ARMY I could see through the references in the first few chapters easily hehe :D but other than that, the story is solid, you can tell the author really puts in a lot of effort to write it. One issue I had was the problem of telling instead of showing the characters' action and thoughts. That could be brushed up upon, but overall it's a good story with a unique concept!