Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in They called me FIVE
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First of all, I like the title! It kinda reminds me of the book "I am number four". It also has a unique story line that the author described in the beginning of the chapter. That goes to show how dedicated he is (the author) to let, readers, know the world! Great job (plus *coughs* the scratching of his balls WKKWKW) Overall I like how you explained the story and what they see. The only thing that I want to point out are the confusing words and sentences in the story. It didnt distrupted my journey, but it would be really nice if you could improve those few lines better!
They called me FIVE
phoenixhyperion
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I know there was a film name "I am number four." But I did not know it was based on a book. I might need to read it. This novel just sounds like "I am number four." Or at least the last part is just like it.
Joshua_Chapman_0663:You know there is a film based off the book?
Is it based off of the i am number four series or taken inspiration from it? Thay were my favorite books tonread during middle school lol
phoenixhyperion:Thanks for the advice 😉
Actually, its based on Umbrella Academy netflix series 😅 I just love Five and Klaus so much I want to make my first fantasy novel inspired by their characters. It was only later I found out (from the reviews) there's actually a book 'I Am Number Four'. Of course I binge read it in two weeks. It took me a week to get over Henri's death.😢 and Sarah... 😭 mud freaking fudge Saraahh!!! 😢 I just can't get over her. I really dont know if I should read the book after United as One or not.
Kayastor:Is it based off of the i am number four series or taken inspiration from it? Thay were my favorite books tonread during middle school lol
Henris death was so sad :( it made me cry the first time reading it. luckily i was reading in the hallway so none of my friends saw me lol. The books after united as one are pretty good its main characters are students from the academy for humans who got powers. of corse we still see john and everyone else but they are teachers or off doing their own thing.
phoenixhyperion:Actually, its based on Umbrella Academy netflix series 😅 I just love Five and Klaus so much I want to make my first fantasy novel inspired by their characters. It was only later I found out (from the reviews) there's actually a book 'I Am Number Four'. Of course I binge read it in two weeks. It took me a week to get over Henri's death.😢 and Sarah... 😭 mud freaking fudge Saraahh!!! 😢 I just can't get over her. I really dont know if I should read the book after United as One or not.
Kayastor:Henris death was so sad :( it made me cry the first time reading it. luckily i was reading in the hallway so none of my friends saw me lol. The books after united as one are pretty good its main characters are students from the academy for humans who got powers. of corse we still see john and everyone else but they are teachers or off doing their own thing.
phoenixhyperion:Cool! But I still can't get over Sarah. Is Nine still there? I freaking love him 🤣
Kayastor:Henris death was so sad :( it made me cry the first time reading it. luckily i was reading in the hallway so none of my friends saw me lol. The books after united as one are pretty good its main characters are students from the academy for humans who got powers. of corse we still see john and everyone else but they are teachers or off doing their own thing.
Yeah i remember watching it a couple years ago. I personally think it is a decent film but it got a lot of things wrong from the book so I dont remember enjoying it.
Joshua_Chapman_0663:You know there is a film based off the book?
Kayastor:Henris death was so sad :( it made me cry the first time reading it. luckily i was reading in the hallway so none of my friends saw me lol. The books after united as one are pretty good its main characters are students from the academy for humans who got powers. of corse we still see john and everyone else but they are teachers or off doing their own thing.
Kayastor:Yeah i remember watching it a couple years ago. I personally think it is a decent film but it got a lot of things wrong from the book so I dont remember enjoying it.
phoenixhyperion:Actually, its based on Umbrella Academy netflix series 😅 I just love Five and Klaus so much I want to make my first fantasy novel inspired by their characters. It was only later I found out (from the reviews) there's actually a book 'I Am Number Four'. Of course I binge read it in two weeks. It took me a week to get over Henri's death.😢 and Sarah... 😭 mud freaking fudge Saraahh!!! 😢 I just can't get over her. I really dont know if I should read the book after United as One or not.
Y'mean the MC here? At first, he's the hero type. He has skeptical, overdramatic nonsense attitude and most of the time can be irritating. By irritating I mean a lot. Read the hundred chaps and he's still like that. If you hate that type of MC, feel free to drop this story. If you still want to read it, cool. As bonus, I got something for ya. A character arc SPOILER. If you have watched AoT and Code Geass anime, be warn MC has the same trait as Eren and Lelouch.
dan_saiyad:is hero crazy like 5 and is villainous type hmm?