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2022-07-03 23:13

Good Story with lots of potential, however I felt there wasn't enough action involved and is more like a slice of life story. The story development is extremely slow. The main character hardly abuses his own ability of travelling to other worlds which I feel like the main objective of saving Gia gets lost somewhere down the line or is just developing to slowly. Also the many characters are introduced in my opinion as it becomes a little chaotic. However the Author doesn't forget about these characters and no one fades away in the background. The power system is a little unique too. This at the end of the day is my honest my opinion. But there were times I had to force my self to keep reading so I didn't drop it to early. Slice of life just isn't me i guess. I enjoy a good Action packed novel with romance and maybe a harem but not to many members as it becomes too chaotic.

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