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CharlatanKlein
CharlatanKleinLv42yr
2022-08-02 16:41

I honestly don't know what to say to this novel rn(I'm still thinking as I write) I just want to rate this novel for now but we have to write a review first before we get to do that 😩 But, all I know that this is a very good novel and a slow burn romance, INDEED 🤧 Author-san kept us on the edge for quite some time but I feel fortunate but also unfortunate to have only discovered this novel now. Fortunate because, there's a great progress in the plot already, and I didn't need to wait for updates from chapter one till this point in the novel. And unfortunate, because, this is a really good novel, I had to try out and skim a lot of novel and before I got to discover this one. Honestly, with how good the author's writing is (from the grammar, character and their developments to plot building), I feel that this novel is a little underrated. Maybe it's 'cuz updates aren't like those top novels that could release a chapter daily I don't know, but it's the only flaw that I could find no matter where I look. *shrugs*乁(´ ~｀)ㄏ The emotions this novel could evoke in me really made me feel angry, cry, or laugh as I read from the character's perspective! (I just love when novels makes me feel different emotions, it's what I'm looking for, special when I read romance genres😌✨) The twists kinda makes the progression in the MC and ML's relationship 'drawn out' but, it is "slow burn" so we gotta live with that (´；ω；｀) Tthis is actually, my first time looking for slow burn romance 'cuz I don't like slow the progressions in romance novels. But this time, I wanted to feel on edge in the MC's romance a bit, but not to the point where I'd feel frustrated) And well, I gotta say, this novel is just what I was looking for! PS. I said back there that the non-daily or unscheduled is the flaw of this novel, but still, I gave it full 5 stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐✨ That's 'cuz if the novel, as long as I fall for the characters, the story of the novel and everything else in it, no flaw could make me give anything but a perfect stars/grade to that novel 🤩✨💯 (Give love to author-san for sharing this gem novel of their to us~ 😌💖💕)

The Dragon's Kiss

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Thank you for your kind review! And for reading my novel ❤️ Your comments always brighten my day! ☺️

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