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Mel_Aniv
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2021-05-07 18:50

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉

The Dragon's Kiss

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251 Chs

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Mel_Aniv
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From review swap thread dear.........please also check out mine, please 🙏 😉 ❤️

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Thank you so much for your review! (:

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Mel_Aniv
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You're welcome!

Currer:Thank you so much for your review! (:
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