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mirxkewl
mirxkewlLv13yr
2021-06-07 22:07

Based on just the first few chapters, I'm impressed by the quality of this novel. The grammar is close to flawless and the characters are extremely engaging. I'm fond of the way the main character interacts with the brother-figure in her life and how their siblingly relationship is depicted so light-heartedly, considering the overall concept. The opening scene is captivating as well and draws the audience right in. I like that I can get a sense of the character's personality and ideology based on her interactions as shown in the first chapter and am definitely excited to see more of her in the future. For a Fantasy Romance, this has a lot of potential! Thank you for writing this :D

The Dragon's Kiss

Currer
4.8
251 Chs

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Currer
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Thank you so much (:

3yr
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genona
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This is one of the best novels I've found on here so far - professional quality writing and editing, with a story I couldn't stop reading. I just got caught up with the last chapter, sadly, and am already impatient for more.

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Michelle_Andersen
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So glad i found this book! You will be hooked!!! Fantastic writing with the perfect amount of twist to really pull you into the story and charaters. You will eagerly be waiting for updates after you get sucked into all out binge read. The ML is quite instisingly myterious and the FL is a strong character with all that is thrown at her. I cant wait for the two to of them to make magic happen.

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PlayingWithFire
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This book is one of my absolute favs and have been ever since I started reading it. It’s told so well in a beautiful but uncomplicated language that everybody can follow, with a strong FL with curious abilities. The characters in this book are very well rounded and so is the storyline. I have yet to get bored by a chapter (which I normally do). This author also has a highly evolved sense of humour, so it has some really funny interactions/moments. FYI, If you’re looking for steamy explicit writing, this is not it lol. Normally this is exactly what I’m looking for so it speaks volumes that I’m still praising this book to the heavens, AND it is still amongst some of my favourites.

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slowestcook
slowestcookLv15

5 stars all around! I’ve read every chapter so far and can’t wait for more. I felt drawn in and invested in the characters from the beginning—love the way the author has developed them so far and gradually keeps introducing more. The pacing keeps me interested, and I appreciate the balance between the dialogue/world building/etc. Also, surprisingly few errors! I don’t know if there’s an editor or if the author does it all, but it’s well done. 🙌 (And I feel like the chapters are a very satisfying length 👌) Excited to see what the author has in store! Thank you for sharing this story with us! I’m a fan!

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Mel_Aniv
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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) 😉

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Blackcat96
Blackcat96Lv11

I like how the story written, but the female lead character was a little bit immature. In my opinion, since she's trained as princess guard and educated as princess substitute; she's supposedly aware as her own identity... I can't help but imagine her with more mature point of view, analytical guard, and cautious personality. however, I seen her like she truly feel as a princess, Rash, and easily flustered. Isn't she should be a tough lad ? I don't know if I'm wrong, but over all the story is well-written. How the author describing the surrounding as well as the flow of story.

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Oithuf8733
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The story is a nice mix of suspense, mystery, light comEdy, steamy romance and action. I love the FL! Kel is strong but imperfect. I am looking forward to seeing how she grow❤️❤️❤️

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Britta_M_313
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I am an English teacher and a stickler about grammar, but this story is beautifully written! Everything about it is fantastic and intriguing. I look forward to more updates so we can continue the story! Outstanding job!

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The_Procrastinator
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