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2021-07-16 04:11

I am so intrigued with this book. It always leaves me wanting to read more. I always look forward to reading the updates. I have been trying to not read the book so I can read more chapters at once but I cant stay away that long lol. The story is makes you want to keep reading and the characters are great!

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Aaaaw! Thank you so much for this review! I will continue to work hard~! Another chapter dedication to be given to you soon~! 🥰🥰🥰

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MysticAmy
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As usual, I will give myself a review and assess myself. 😁 For writing quality, I give myself a 4. In all the novels I’ve written so far, I mostly give myself a 4 here because I find myself not being too satisfied with how I write—how I narrate, and my choice of vocabulary. Yes, I am my own perfectionist and I always believe that I can do more—I can do better. But alas, my laziness and my schedule is saying otherwise. 😅 Nevertheless, I’ll try my best to strive! Update stability, I give myself a 5. Why the heck not? 😂 With or without stockpile, I give myself a pat in the back for updating daily~! Story development, I give it a 5. I may have written 30 chapters so far (others published, orthers stockpiled), but I am proud of the pacing of my story. Not too slow, not too fast—just right. Other than that, no excessive info dumps and would just rely on the flow of the story for concepts to happen. 😁 Character design, I can give it a 5. This is something I am planning way before I even posted the book for the Spirity entry. Furthermore, I am actually enjoying how I also create characters along the way as I write! It means that my creativity is not failing me! Lastly, world background, 5. Since it’s not fantasy, I find the setting of the story easier to make even as I go along with the story. However, further researches should be done so as to avoid loopholes or misgiving of informations and whatnot. This leaves me with an overall rate of 4.8 on my book. This is my first time doing contemporary romance and I do hope I can pull this off~! Regards to me and everyone participating in the Spirity! May our words be plenty, my our creativity be spontaneous, and may the odds be ever in our favor~! 😉💪

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